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Morning Dew

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Morning Dew

Your love will fade as does the morning dew
Enamored now yet soon this love will fly
Your passion will grow old and not feel new
The candle will but flicker then will die

You’ll take from me all that your hunger needs
Fulfill your every craving and much more
You’ll keep me while your mouth a wanton feeds
Then leave me weeping as you close the door

You’ll find another woman young and fresh
Her ears to impregnate with all your lies
Devour ever bit of her sweet flesh
Then make the deluge burst forth from her eyes

And yet I smile for someday you will be
Tormented by the thoughts of loving me

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:31:00 AM

    Good afternoon Eileen, happy Sunday!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/20/2013 12:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well, HI! I'm not sure the time of day right now, but happy thoughts your way! :)
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 4:57:00 PM

    words cuts deep inside the readers' mind echoing within the very center of our imagination...love this, eileen.:)

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/20/2013 7:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Nette. I'm glad that you liked it...
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 10:58:00 AM

    my favourite poetry form, by one of my favourite poets,,, and so clever this is too....

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/20/2013 7:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm doubly honored, Harry...One of your favorite poets...I've been waiting long to read this. :)
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 10:26:00 AM

    So much emotion ..love and passion..The kind of love only a woman knows how to give ..So much truth here.Yes so many betray their soul mates just for adventure..just to have someone younger..then when they realize what they had its too late to go back..cause the soul mate is gone.So deep dear Eileen.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/20/2013 7:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    YOU ARE 100% true, my dear. Only women can do that... :) Thanks for the visit and the insights you've shared.
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 9:21:00 AM

    ooh - great ending! (the rest of the poem is pretty wonderful, too!)

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/20/2013 7:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Thanks every so much, Ilene...I appreciate your visit.
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 8:58:00 AM

    Schneikie Eileen! This fine write is a sharp-edged sword...I love it! jimbo

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/20/2013 7:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jimbo....Thanks every so much for this lovely post. So kind of you!
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 8:40:00 AM

    Good morning Eileen thanks for your visits and thoughtful comments this morning. I hope you are in good spirits and enjoying the weekend.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/20/2013 7:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Visiting your work brings me exquisite delight, Richard. Thank you for your visit and post.
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 2:27:00 AM

    wow, what a sonnet this is. AWESOME, my friend, I love these types of love sonnets on the dark side.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/20/2013 7:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Andrea...I'm really in the sonnet mood lately. I have Craig to thank or that. He gave me pointers on how to write one. I'm indebted to him. Hugs for the visit and kind thoughts.
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 8:52:00 PM

    WOW! You write so passionately of all aspects of love! True love, true love that dies, the cheating heart, tormented love... you are a teacher of love, Teach! Hugs, Kenny xoxox

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/20/2013 7:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    One of the nicest posts ever, Jack. How absolutely sweet of you...I'm all for teaching about love.....
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 6:53:00 PM

    You've added bite to this one Eileen, yet another super sonnet, hmmm I wonder if he will be though. Take care, Richard

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/20/2013 7:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes........he will, Mr Seal......One must be positive about such things..........
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 5:30:00 PM

    When a man looks for a woman to love and not to satiate his passions then he will never go away. It is true that the beauty of the body fades away but the beauty of a woman's soul forever flourishes! Very beautiful, true and well-constructed poem! Filakia kai na eisai panta kala agapith Eileen!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/20/2013 7:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ah, if this is true with you, my dear poet....your woman is a lucky one indeed. I don't believe there are many men like this in the world, but perhaps I'm wrong. Thanks for the post...Filakia gia sena....
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 5:22:00 PM

    I echo Drake's Holy crap! this one rocks! Yy favorite line is "Her ears to impregnate with your lies!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/20/2013 7:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Thanks, Richard. Glad you liked it....
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 2:22:00 PM

    Holy crap. I didn't expect this poem to go in the direction it did. This was incredible. A powerful redefining of "don't know what you got, til it's gone".

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/20/2013 7:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes....and then it's too late. Thanks for the visit, Drake.