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  1. Date: 7/13/2014 11:44:00 AM
    Congratulations on a very fine well-deserved win, Danesh!

  1. Date: 7/11/2014 4:18:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara

  1. Date: 7/11/2014 7:14:00 AM
    Enjoyed this strongly expressed write, Danesh. Carry on writing, knowing that at least someone out there is feeling just like you. Nobody is ever hopeless at everything!! Congrats on a merited win. // paul

  1. Date: 7/10/2014 6:51:00 PM
    Congrats my friend....Tim

  1. Date: 7/10/2014 2:07:00 PM
    Danesh, I am so glad this wasn't your last poem.. Keep writing my friend. Get it all out, but don't you ever give up.. Congrats on a great win.. Hugs.. Arlene

  1. Date: 7/10/2014 11:20:00 AM
    Danesh, i hope this is just a poem.. it is sad, :) Congratulations, on your fine win. Thanks for the support :) Enjoy my latest blog ""A True Friend"" if you'd like.... Love Linda

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 1:40:00 PM
    Danesh...this broke my heart. I'm so sorry to read this. Truly I am...Something just compelled me to I know why. Your feelings are not unique to you, my dear...How often have I felt the same way...That my work is not good enough..That I'm being snubbed...DON'T GET STUCK IN THIS SELF DESTRUCTIVE WAY OF THINKING...

    Morgan Avatar Danesh Morgan
    Date: 3/4/2014 11:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you, I have continued to write, and I will
    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 10/18/2013 1:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    .Believe in yourself...People come..people go...You have to live with YOURSELF forever. Please....please don't be discouraged. It's the climb....Not reaching the top..(Ok sappy to quote Miley, but hope it made you smile!) Hugs
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 12:37:00 PM
    I see talent in your poetry especially in your piece "a kiss from heaven." I don't know much of anything when it comes to poetry, all I know is how to rhyme words in order to convey my feelings. If you notice pretty much all of my poems are labeled "rhyme" haha. Most of them I put on here because I like them, and if somebody else likes them too than great. But I could care less, honestly. I write because it's the only way my soul knows how to speak externally. I enjoy words on paper,

    Farley IV Avatar Patrick Farley IV
    Date: 10/18/2013 12:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ran out of room. I enjoy words on paper because they come out better for me then talking outloud. I guess what I'm saying is try to look at writing poetry from a paradoxical standpoint. The less you care about what the people on here think, the more freely your soul will be able to speak through your poetry and the better you will become. Art is not confined in a box, and writing style is infinite. All this is just in my opinion but I hope I inspired you some. Much Love -Patrick Farley IV
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 4:30:00 AM
    - The joy of writing ..... not a first place you need .... - Read other's poems, send comments ... more will come to your poems to give you feedback ..... - Never give up ... - I'm "only" a "kitchen table" writes ..... no poet. - But love writing!! - Thinking: "Read my poems or not .." - Have a beautiful weekend, Danesh ! // A-L :)

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 3:43:00 AM
    This is my last composed poem. there's no hidden message its as clear as the bright sky. I will enter as many contest with my balance poems. . . and will write again when i reach the top somewhere. . . in the mean time i will post all my old poems. maybe this poem would get me that prize!

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 3:40:00 AM
    You have talent, really! - If you give up .... how will you be "better" - There are not many who are "real" poets here ... but we do the best we can ... and gets better with time ... we learn from each other ... continue with your work my friend Danesh ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Morgan Avatar Danesh Morgan
    Date: 10/18/2013 3:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Anne L, thanks for the positive comment My passion takes a hitting every time, I am no poet, just an expressionist, never studied poetry, even ridiculed by my English teacher on my written poem, but an American woman who came to conduct poetry said I had the gift,