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Great poetry requires
finesse and rhyme,
this impatient poetess
gives it her time.

Poetry needs heart
and soul and tears,
I showed you what
was hidden for years.

Poetry requires thoughts
running free on the page,
you were the key
that unlocked my cage.

Poetry has a rhythm
if given a chance,
you were the one
who asked me to dance.

I give it my all
with time and finesse,
and together with heart
have made a success.



Written for Just That Archaic Poet's contest - 
"Reinvent, Reimagine, Revamp!"
Inspired by his poem, "You and I and I and You"

(My interpretation was "opposites attract". I am the total opposite personality of what a poet should be. Yet, poetry and I get along great!)

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  1. Date: 8/29/2014 5:29:00 PM
    Congrats Kelly; a lovely song to poetry; I understand that it can captivate but also set you free. well done. // paul

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 9/2/2014 11:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Poetry is like a best friend to me. It is that one person who will listen and therefore, set your voice free, but it can also become like a passion and an addiction.... Thank you for your lovely comments, Paul. I appreciate it very much :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2014 5:10:00 PM
    Kelly, thanks for supporting my one WORD title contest. Enjoy the win. ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 3/31/2014 6:57:00 PM
    I tried clicking on various poems to find one I have not commented to yet, but can't find one and I am off to the gym now. Thanks again for everything and I am waiting for new poems from you!!

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 4/1/2014 12:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are very welcome, Andrea. I am not sure when I will be posting something new. I've gotten some poems written, though, and I will try to post them soon! :)
  1. Date: 1/22/2014 8:45:00 PM
    Kelly What a cleverly creative write. I like how you wrote a poem for poetry, which includes passion and heart. Nice job Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Knights poem.

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 8:43:00 PM
    Wonderful revamp, cool write and thank you for the comment, cheri

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 5:05:00 AM
    What a fine combination this is! Love where you have taken the prompt with this write... Good luck.

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 4:10:00 PM
    Nice write Kelly, you are a wonderful poet. A belated congrats on your win...peter

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 11:28:00 PM
    hey, you did GREAT with this challenge. BIG congrats on your win. ME LIKES!

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 7:55:00 PM
    you did a great job with this challenge and turned out a great poem...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 11:05:00 AM
    Kelly, It's obvious that you are in sync with poetry. Beautiful rhyme, thought and style. I admire your ability. Congrats on the win !

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 9:55:00 AM
    Kelly---I loved the flow and rhyme scheme of this excellent poem! Many congrats on your win...much deserved! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 7:44:00 AM
    Fantastic job Kelly, I can see why you and poetry get along.. Congrats.

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 7:20:00 AM
    congrats Kelly!

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 6:34:00 AM
    Bravo Kelly love the depth in these lines--congrats!

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 6:46:00 PM
    Cleverly done! I love your style, and your infinite imagination. (One of the reasons I was drawn to your work is the rhythm and short 'e' consonance of your name.) Good luck in the contest. Keith

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 11/4/2013 2:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the compliment on my name! I haven't had a comment about that before. I have never noticed that "e" is the only vowel in my name. Except for my middle name!
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 5:04:00 AM
    I don't know if the contest has been judged yet or not..Reads like a winner to me...Enjoyed reading this morning.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 4:55:00 PM
    A clever interpretation of Archaic's poem. Very much enjoyed this point of view. Good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 2:37:00 PM
    great poetry comes from the heart... Kelly your poem is well written and thought out... hope to hear from you soon... sending soup mail...LINDA

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 4:49:00 PM
    sheer elegance is this wonderful poetry, also the theme, is so informative also...

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 8:58:00 AM
    Beautifully done. I like it.

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