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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 12:13:00 PM

    Once again, Yasmin, your poem has touched the deepest parts within me. loving this one again...Linda

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 10:40:00 AM

    aw Yassie how can you be alone I'm not alone you are with me my friend & I with you. This is a powerful verse! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 4:29:00 PM

    Very heartfelt Yasmin; so sad but so true. I enjoyed your expression.

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 12:52:00 PM

    howdee, mareey.. hope to read something new forn you... you are missed..:) you okay.. huggs form priya!.. new moon is here.. had nice ritual with indian friends..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 1:29:00 PM

    - Congrats on the win !!! - Wishing you a beautiful weekend, dear Yasmin! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 8:20:00 PM

    Yasmin, awesome deep win.. LOVE -- SKAT

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:21:00 PM

    very deep Yasmin....nice win...PD

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 11:04:00 AM

    Very true and wise...congrats on your winning placement, Yasmin! Love and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 8:22:00 AM

    Congrats on the win in the contest, yasmin

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 11:14:00 PM

    you always write about such themes with wisdom and sensitivity, dear friend. Congrats on a well deserved win.

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 5:46:00 PM

    you have captured that feeling well in this poignant piece...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 5:43:00 PM

    Hi Yasmin, A perceptive write..Thanks for sharing this one.. Ken

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 10:22:00 AM

    When something comes from heaven I give it the highest praise.

    loving iii Avatar john loving iii Date: 10/19/2013 10:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Who cares about contest? This won me.
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 5:54:00 AM

    oh such a bleak portrayal of loneliness, but excellent in its execution; much truth in your words - congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 7:35:00 PM

    Yasmin Yasmin...such lovely words almost disguise the subject you write about but a most touching poem....congratulations... you....

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 11:32:00 AM

    mareeey, a most penetrating reflection... i hope this kind of loneliness does not apply to you... beautifully done as always.. how are you?.. miss your stories..:) hugggs

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 9:15:00 AM

    Sword of "D"omocles a person

    Situation Avatar The Situation Date: 10/18/2013 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes I looked it up. It's a neat phrase.
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 10:45:00 PM

    One of your best! No words to express my admiration for this poem. BG

    Situation Avatar The Situation Date: 10/18/2013 9:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the back up Barbara.
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 9:29:00 PM

    This is such a sad write, the subject matter is sad but your poem is masterfully crafted, thus giving the feeling of sadness, which is done so exquisitely! I really enjoyed reading this immaculate piece, so perfectly written my friend! What a glorious and brilliant poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 1:04:00 PM

    One definitely cannot cheat loneliness with drugs. Well expressed ideas in this piece. -Patrick Farley IV

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 12:41:00 PM

    Yasmin. You finally did it. YOU KNOCKED MY SOCKS OFF!!!!!!!! This piece is magnificant. I look at it as something i wish I had writen myself. The way you chose and used your words. And the truth, you had that special way of useing the truth as a solid thing. as i read i thought of getting a dictionary to look up words i already knew the meaning of.and i only read it once and was stunned by the greatness of it. i'll have to copy it and fav it. Congradulations this will be the best i read 4 a wile

    loving iii Avatar john loving iii Date: 10/17/2013 12:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    sorry, i ran out of space. but let me say this piece, this is the jewel in your box of poetry. and it's not just you. these same words would go to anybody else who would have writen it. But I'm glad it was you. JOHN HENRY LOVING III
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 11:31:00 AM

    - You describe loneliness face perfectly, dear Yasmin - Have a nice day! - Wish you all the luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 10:56:00 AM

    Beautiful poem and the feelings of upscale and elegant language .