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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 12:13:00 PM
    Once again, Yasmin, your poem has touched the deepest parts within me. loving this one again...Linda

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 10:40:00 AM
    aw Yassie how can you be alone I'm not alone you are with me my friend & I with you. This is a powerful verse! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 4:29:00 PM
    Very heartfelt Yasmin; so sad but so true. I enjoyed your expression.

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 12:52:00 PM
    howdee, mareey.. hope to read something new forn you... you are missed..:) you okay.. huggs form priya!.. new moon is here.. had nice ritual with indian friends..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 1:29:00 PM
    - Congrats on the win !!! - Wishing you a beautiful weekend, dear Yasmin! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 8:20:00 PM
    Yasmin, awesome deep win.. LOVE -- SKAT

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:21:00 PM
    very deep Yasmin....nice win...PD

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 11:04:00 AM
    Very true and wise...congrats on your winning placement, Yasmin! Love and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 8:22:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, yasmin

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 11:14:00 PM
    you always write about such themes with wisdom and sensitivity, dear friend. Congrats on a well deserved win.

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 5:46:00 PM
    you have captured that feeling well in this poignant piece...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 5:43:00 PM
    Hi Yasmin, A perceptive write..Thanks for sharing this one.. Ken

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 10:22:00 AM
    When something comes from heaven I give it the highest praise.

    loving iii Avatar john loving iii
    Date: 10/19/2013 10:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Who cares about contest? This won me.
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 5:54:00 AM
    oh such a bleak portrayal of loneliness, but excellent in its execution; much truth in your words - congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 7:35:00 PM
    Yasmin Yasmin...such lovely words almost disguise the subject you write about but a most touching poem....congratulations... you....

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 11:32:00 AM
    mareeey, a most penetrating reflection... i hope this kind of loneliness does not apply to you... beautifully done as always.. how are you?.. miss your stories..:) hugggs

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 9:15:00 AM
    Sword of "D"omocles a person

    Situation Avatar The Situation
    Date: 10/18/2013 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes I looked it up. It's a neat phrase.
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 10:45:00 PM
    One of your best! No words to express my admiration for this poem. BG

    Situation Avatar The Situation
    Date: 10/18/2013 9:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the back up Barbara.
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 9:29:00 PM
    This is such a sad write, the subject matter is sad but your poem is masterfully crafted, thus giving the feeling of sadness, which is done so exquisitely! I really enjoyed reading this immaculate piece, so perfectly written my friend! What a glorious and brilliant poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 1:04:00 PM
    One definitely cannot cheat loneliness with drugs. Well expressed ideas in this piece. -Patrick Farley IV