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Collection of Birds

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Collection of Birds

Happy pelican
eating an enormous fish
see his pouch bulging

Merry kingfisher
waiting on his pole for fish
he darts and spears one

Full of joy and fun
the skylark warbles in glee
delight in each note

Fearsome eagle drops
plummeting down like a stone
striking hard he kills

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  1. Date: 10/22/2013 6:33:00 AM
    nice poem

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/22/2013 8:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi There mr/s X Ty for enjoying Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 10/20/2013 5:03:00 AM
    Lovely images my friend.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/20/2013 6:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    a bit of fun dear M.M birds enrich the world Shadow x ox smile hugs
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 10:40:00 PM
    If it is for a contest, please give once over to the first line of the last haiku. You have created a lovely pictures of naturfe

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/18/2013 4:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Dr Ram it is not at the moment but Ty so much for pointing it out I have corrected it also Ty for reading Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 6:53:00 PM
    This isone form that eludes me, you seem to be comfortable with it.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/17/2013 7:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I love the form. Mind you I could not do some of the forms you use with such ease Shadow x smile hugs
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 2:14:00 PM
    - Quality haiku, Shadow ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/17/2013 2:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Anne Lise Ty so much have a great weekend Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 12:32:00 PM
    A beautiful natural picture adorned with very nice imagination, my friend. Excellent beauty is hidden in it. Loved always, bl

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/17/2013 1:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Bl you are always so kind in your reviews ty Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 10:37:00 AM
    Excellent Haiku. Thanks for sharing. JM

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/17/2013 1:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Joseph my pleasure so glad you enjoyed them Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 6:46:00 AM
    Lovely poem. I love to watch birds and I felt like I was watching yours through the words.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/17/2013 1:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Monterey trust all is well birds are lovely to watch so graceful. Ty for enjoying Shadow x smile