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Midnight by silent lake

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Midnight by silent lake

Like razorblades
knowing the difference
Midnight by silent lake 
Flat serene only birds 
Rustling in bushes  
Two eyes in a moonlit sky
Amongst a million stars 
Life peace hope and  
My love,
My honest love for you

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  1. Date: 11/3/2013 6:27:00 PM

    Hi Avi Welcome to the Soup. Your poems reach a side of me kept buried.......but I do see the sadness and ugliness out there and you let it know your'e awake up to it....well done. SuZ

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 8:36:00 PM

    hi Avi, i like this free verse poem. very dreamy..... awesome and lovely imagery....SKAT

    Cohen  Avatar Avi Cohen Date: 10/17/2013 8:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your avatar is forever embedded on my synapses with your pink presence time And time again! Thank uuuuuu Best wishes Avi
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 8:03:00 AM

    I enjoyed this, I can see an edge of darkness before the sunlight. Well done =)

    Cohen  Avatar Avi Cohen Date: 10/17/2013 8:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Thomas, ya the edge of life exists for sure, glad you came by as I'm new and finding my feet, a new edge too :) Kind rgs Avi