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An Angel In Your Eyes-Win

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An Angel In Your Eyes-Win

An Angel In Your Eyes

On February 1st 1966, I saw the brightest moon,
The coolest moon ever that has shone in my life.
As the space craft Luna-II landed on to the moon
Same time Luna was born to Chandrika, my wife.

Luna-II, the spacecraft landing in precincts of moon
My Luna rising in the precincts of a maternity home
I was all ears hearing news but my heart was tuned
To the phone conjuring up hospital scene blythesome 

I did not utter, think or react as my family did feel
But felt something inside me I never felt before it
As if a cool light generated and rooted and reeled
From moon to earth living up to her name sweet.
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Dr. Ram Mehta   - /15-10-13/
!0th place win 
Contest: An Angel in your eyes by Gail Angel Doyle

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  1. Date: 1/14/2014 4:38:00 PM
    Hi Ram, I always enjoy reading poems about other peoples families, especially the children. I could never have any of my own, the funny thing is, I was always good with other peoples children. I'll never know the joys of fatherhood but through people like yourself who write such poems as you have written , in a way I can feel the feelings. I do thank you for that my friend. I really enjoyed this write for many different reasons. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 3:43:00 PM
    A very nice win in the contest, Dr. Ram and a very sweet tribute to your daughter! I also have a daughter and she is 4 now. I can't believe she will be 5 on February 3rd. Have a great day, Julie :-)

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 10:52:00 PM
    A beautiful piece. It was very enjoyable to read, Dr. Mehta. How old is Luna now, if you don't mind my inquiring?

    Mehta Avatar Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 11/14/2013 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    She is 47 years old and living in Canada
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 9:52:00 AM
    congrats Dr. Ram.

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 6:47:00 AM
    Nice win Dr. Ram, I can't wait for your next one. Roger

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 4:05:00 AM
    A wonderful write Dr Ram and thanks again for your kind comments on various poems I have written. Robert CD

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 8:07:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading again, Dr. Ram! BIG congrats to you!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 6:42:00 PM
    beautiful poem ....congrats on your win Dr Ram

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 4:05:00 PM
    wonderful poem, what a blessed memory! congrats on your win! enjoy the journey, Stacey

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 1:23:00 PM
    Very cool juxtaposition, Doc. Very sweet and heartfelt; kudos, my friend! :)

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 6:24:00 PM
    What a beautiful name- your daughter was named Luna. Thank you for your comments. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 5:42:00 PM
    Very beautiful and touching! A wonderfully written poem, Dr., I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you for the nice comments, once again.

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 11:48:00 AM
    You have painted beautiful imagery in this excellent rhyme, Dr. Mehta. I particularly loved the title of your poem, as well. My best wishes to you in the contest. Thank you for your many visits to my page, and your kind comments.

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 5:26:00 PM
    Smile, Very Nice As Beautiful This Comparison Of Life Unto Celestial Light * Shine Bright Sweet Luna ~ Thank You For Your Kind Visit Also Dr. Mehta; Much Appreciated. Love, John

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 3:03:00 PM
    beautiful Dr Ram you cover both events with plume lovely flow to your rhyme gl in contest Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 2:58:00 PM
    wow you sure pen beautiful

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 10:39:00 AM
    Beautiful poem for the contest. Good luck my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 7:03:00 AM
    The quiet intensity and expansive love that fills this poem are stunning.

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 4:34:00 AM
    Dr. Ram, a nice flow in your rhyming poem - beautiful. - Luck in contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 3:00:00 AM
    NICE POEM........................... RAM THANKS FOR VISITING MY POEM.....

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