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Haiku 96

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Haiku 96

	
	
	
	
	Haiku 96
	
	
	woodland stream
	whirlpools tying water 
	into smoke rings
	
	
	
	

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  1. Date: 10/19/2013 6:34:00 PM

    I can picture this. Well done.

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 12:04:00 PM

    superbly done with a greeat juxtaposition, jack... idol!..:) huggs

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 10/19/2013 11:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot, Nette... Jack
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 7:50:00 PM

    this is one of your best. LOVE it.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 10/19/2013 11:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Andrea. I'm glad you liked it... Jack
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 6:37:00 PM

    Totally awesome....I'll always think of you when I see one now....:-)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 10/18/2013 12:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Smoke rings for a non-smoker? Hmmm... Jack
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 12:47:00 PM

    - Competent !!! - Well done,Jack ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 10/17/2013 12:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry... I typed my response tp Drake in the wrong box... Jack
    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 10/17/2013 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, as always, Drake... Jack
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 8:49:00 AM

    Another beauty. The "smoke ring" speak volumes.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 10/17/2013 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, as always, Drake... Jack
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 10:34:00 PM

    Wonderful use of images, Jack

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 10/16/2013 10:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the comment... Jack