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Immortal beloved

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Immortal beloved

My immortal beloved
dusk and thick as night
your dark skin and rolling curls
I have sought for centuries...

The flood from your candid form
flows like a river
my eternal beloved
I feel your past pain of mortality..

I sense the warmth and current
of your deep red blood
I hurl and skew my kisses
like crimson roses of fire...

Your hands touch me
light and cold
sending a shiver through me
we shine with the glory of Luna...

Gift me with your lunar smile
your irises, sullen and chaotic
they flash when they hear my sigh
soaring from deep within my gut...

yes, you my shadow woman
bend your head of black hair
just slightly to one side
drink my blood, heart of hearts...

I will give you everything
and while i'm in agony
you, my love of all loves
draw sustenance from my burning blood...

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  1. Date: 11/21/2013 3:06:00 PM
    Glory of Luna--- gloire de Lune? Perhaps. Intoxicating!

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 11/21/2013 4:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Gerald! Ken
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 8:18:00 AM
    Brilliant ken

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 10/22/2013 9:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey poet buddy, Thanks for the wonderful visit my friend.. Ken
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 2:45:00 AM
    WOW! You are one romantic man. Don't change. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 10/19/2013 4:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Lucilla, Thank you for your kindest comment.. Ken
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 9:14:00 PM
    This is a very romantic gothic poem, Ken! Very captivating and enchanting! I loved it!...Thank you so much for the kind comments.

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 10/18/2013 10:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Kelly, you are most kind.. Ken
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 3:43:00 PM
    penned really beautiful dear friend

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 10/18/2013 3:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Liam, Thanks buddy for the visit.. Ken
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 2:39:00 AM
    A very beautiful Halloween poem, I've enjoyed reading this afternoon my dear friend Ken. Kudos! Thank you so much also for sharing. So love it and enjoyed! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 10/18/2013 4:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Leonora, Thank you for stopping by, always appreciated.. Ken
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 1:29:00 PM
    Loved the vampire theme....enjoyed reading your work....Julie :-)

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 10/17/2013 1:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Julie, Enjoyed your visit, thanks! Ken
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 7:47:00 AM
    Great Halloween work that grabs the audience and draws them into a surprise ending..If for a contest, should be in the winners' list in my book..Thanks for the review of my work..I hope that this will be a great day for you..Sara

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 10/17/2013 8:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Sara, Thanks for reviewing my verse.. Ken
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 4:30:00 AM
    - Ken, you are really romantic ..... - So tender and loving words .... I must admit that I'm melting!! - Beautiful!! - Just continue .... - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 10/17/2013 5:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Anne, Than you for such a lovely visit.. Ken
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 1:57:00 AM
    Quite a remarkable piece you composed. I am very impressed! :) Awesome work, and thanks for your gracious visits. Always, Laura

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 10/17/2013 5:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Laura, Thank you for stopping by as well.. Ken
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 1:13:00 AM
    Ken!! This is a scorcher. You write so touching LOVE Poetry. This is awesome. Keep up the serenade! Friend JM

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 10/17/2013 5:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Joseph, Thank you for the most kind visit my friend.. Ken
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 12:01:00 AM
    "you set my soul on fire", ken... a most passionate composition subtly embracing a moment mysteriously eerie!.. wow.. :) huggs

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 10/17/2013 12:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Nette, Thank you for the lovely comment.. Ken