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your face sadness

1

Take all the trees of the poet
and give me one drop from your face sadness 
I want to blow the joy of the world !

2

Written on a bottle of poem perfume
Made in your face !

3

Suffice it to write to you ..
to spread smell of your face on my fingers
on The shirt of place
I write to you ..
or ..
Peel an orange !


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  1. Date: 10/27/2013 10:12:00 AM

    Dheya, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 1:35:00 AM

    Dheya, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 8:57:00 AM

    Hi Dea; This is a good poem. I too translate from English to Spanish, or visa versa. I see that you are new here. Welcome to the Soup and I hope you enjoy your stay here. Thanks for reading my poem.... Lucilla

    shirqati Avatar dheya shirqati Date: 10/19/2013 9:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks poet .. I am glad that you like the poem I suggested writing publishing here and I always try to communicate with poets .. Regards
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 5:10:00 AM

    Hi I know that you translate the poems from Arabic and your verses are a bit different when you translate to English. I am telling you what I believe is right It is better to reorganize your poem and remove the [123]

    shirqati Avatar dheya shirqati Date: 10/18/2013 2:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    All what you wrote is true, my friend Thank you very much Regards
    Phillips Avatar Christine Phillips Date: 10/18/2013 6:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Also I understand that the theme from Middle Eastern poetic forms involved more than one story which sometimes make it difficult to translate as one poem in English. Sometimes the entire story loses its meaning because some of the terms doesn't make sense when translated to English. So one has to use the best vocabulary to replace those meaning.
    Phillips Avatar Christine Phillips Date: 10/18/2013 6:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No . I don't mean cutting the sections. I was just suggesting that you remove the numbers, they distract from the flow of your poem. I found the same problems when I am editing some poems translated from Arabic to English. Those writers usually put numbers after each verse. Which is why I suggest that you remove the numbers.
    shirqati Avatar dheya shirqati Date: 10/18/2013 6:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear christine ... I completely understand .. But here came because cutting three sections have the same purpose .. Thanks for the info that I mentioned and certainly will be seen by .. My respects
    Phillips Avatar Christine Phillips Date: 10/18/2013 5:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You can randomly visit a number of poets’ page and read them you will get more idea. Debbie is a good person to connect with. She writes blogs all the time. Go to the Blog page and read some of her blog comments. Expand your boundaries do not “stick” many people here are unprofessional and superficial just want you to feel good.
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 8:03:00 PM

    Dea, coming back here again. I am very disappointed by one of the comments on this poem. It maddens me that she does not see the art in using 1, 2, 3, Dea........ how sad she approached you out in the open on your first day instead of soup mail. :(............. SKAT

    shirqati Avatar dheya shirqati Date: 10/18/2013 5:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello and welcome my friend skat .. Above in the original poem is three poems but was assembled one poem because the sections dealing with one theme a beloved face .. I will send you a message next hour .. Thank you with all due respect
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 8:30:00 AM

    Ah! You write like Sufi, one of my favorite poets of all time, he also gave the word enamored new meaning, as he twirled round and round, you are exposing part of your beautiful soul, you might as well dance my friend, in love and peace war has no room to fence, xxx

    shirqati Avatar dheya shirqati Date: 10/17/2013 8:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dear
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 11:26:00 AM

    Dea Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

    shirqati Avatar dheya shirqati Date: 10/16/2013 1:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear skat It's nice to appeal to you the poem .. I am deeply honored that we communicate and talk more about the hair and the other .. Regards
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 9:18:00 AM

    Hello Dea, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

    shirqati Avatar dheya shirqati Date: 10/16/2013 1:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear linda I am delighted that my poem Statistics liked .. I am pleased to Consider the competitions in the next time .. I hope that I get to make new friends for hair Regards
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 8:28:00 AM

    - Welcome to P-Soup, Dea ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

    shirqati Avatar dheya shirqati Date: 10/16/2013 1:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear anne Thank you and I'm joy to be in this beautiful site and I hope to get to know poets from various countries .. Greetings and respect