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Direct Hit

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Direct Hit

It’s a direct hit
Going down in flames by you
Kamikaze: ME

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 10/19/2013 12:55:00 PM

    Don't compel to commit suicide with the flames of sweet heart. Lovely done a beautiful haiku. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 11:56:00 AM

    love it when we make a fool of ourselves, eileen... this is incredible; don;t shoot, lol..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 1:02:00 PM

    egomanic.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/18/2013 10:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you??? :) I'm not that, am I?
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 7:47:00 AM

    I can relate, I have shot myself down many times.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/18/2013 10:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This poem was trying to portray, getting shot by someone...and then...as you are going down in flames, you become a suicide bomber and take the bomber out!!! I don't know if that came across well enough, but that was the intention. Thanks for the visit. Never shoot yourself down, Richard.....
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 10:56:00 AM

    You missed an r and an e out my little Desert Orchid, I'm sure that should read 'kamikrazee Me' lol Take care, Richard

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/18/2013 10:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! Good attempt at humor, Mr Seal...I am NOT crazy...well, not at the moment of posting this comment. HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 9:39:00 AM

    I like this. We are our own best friend or worst enemy. Awesome.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/18/2013 10:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Especially in my case!!! Thanks, Drake. But this poem talks about taking people out with you...Yes, spite and revenge.
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 8:14:00 AM

    great senryu. I'll try one. It's good to learn. Thanks. JM

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/18/2013 10:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yea, you should. I think you will enjoy the challenge. Thanks for the visit.
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 7:20:00 AM

    Sending a double chocolate shot of espresso your way. I hope I'm on target.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/18/2013 10:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    WOW!!!!! YOU are right on target with that one. Got the messages...Thanks a bunch. You are very sweet!
    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 10/16/2013 7:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 10/16/2013 7:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 10/16/2013 5:27:00 AM

    Nice intellectual humor. Eileen

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/18/2013 10:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Thanks every so much, Dr. Ram....
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 5:25:00 AM

    Talking of not missing the target! Wow, Excellent! Thank you!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/18/2013 10:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank YOU for the visit, my dear poet. Always a pleasure!!!! :)