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FEELINGS Why is it that feelings that are deepest Are the hardest to convey? When a dear friend passes on We rarely know what to say. We mumble and we mutter And give out heartfelt hugs To the mother and the father And the family that shrugs. Though deepest love is in our being And sorrow deeply felt We ne'er know what to say That's truly, fully meant. Why can't we say out loud What's really in our heart And pass along those words Before the grave we must depart? c ELR 2013

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  1. Date: 10/16/2013 10:02:00 AM
    I think it's the hardest because it comes from the soul. It's like a vow. Your heart feels it. But, it has to come from within. It has to be meant. Cherished. And, most importantly, honest. Because why rush something so deep. It is a splendid wonder though. We want what is said from deep within to matter, which should take time. Yet, tomorrow isn't guaranteed. Just another of life's ironies. Great writing.

    Wattle Avatar Miss Wattle
    Date: 10/16/2013 10:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Superbly said, Drake. You mirror my thoughts. As you say, what words are expressed must be true and honest. Many thanks.
  1. Date: 10/15/2013 11:27:00 PM
    You have expressed so well in these four stanzas how we must all feel when trying to comfort a friend or loved one that has experience a recent loss. Great write!

    Wattle Avatar Miss Wattle
    Date: 10/15/2013 11:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your comment, Jon; I appreciate you dropping by :)
  1. Date: 10/15/2013 7:31:00 PM
    If anyone, I think you would be able to say the right thing at the appropriate moment. With your way with words, I am convinced my dear Miss Wattle... big loving hugs, xoxoxoxox

    Wattle Avatar Miss Wattle
    Date: 10/15/2013 7:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, dear Jack. Big hugz to you, my friend xoxox