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WHEN DARK GLOWS

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WHEN DARK GLOWS


When evening wears its ashen cream to drape the skin of landscape’s frills My pulsing thoughts reel mind’s windmills where heavy crest ebbs flat, midstream. Oh longings stab from a roguish past I gaze back thrice…in lone sojourn yet, jewelled rims of waves now turn to lift a breath with hope,steadfast. While shadow bites the fading glow a hundred stars bathe eyes quite whole, till moonlight ignites to console Softening dark, through faith’s halo. --------- *Without the dark, we wouldn't see the stars." Write With Your Heart:12 Lines, Juli- Michelle 10/15/13

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  1. Date: 11/14/2013 2:19:00 PM

    Nette---Another work of art and a remarkable win in this contest! Have a great day, Julie ;-)

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 5:49:00 AM

    Congrats on your win, nette

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 3:26:00 AM

    Thank you for your comments Nette,keeping painting and writing.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 7:07:00 AM

    Captivating dear Nette.

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 9:10:00 AM

    You are one of the great poet here on PS friend Nette ;) I'm one of your fan.. all your poems are outstanding..(talaga) If you already published a book, I will buy it at National Bookstore. Good luck in the contest and thanks for passing by ;) God bless you always.

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 4:56:00 PM

    wow \a very beautiful piece

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 2:23:00 PM

    How changes occur in thoughts when dark glows, you have done an excellent magic with excellent words. Loved and enjoyed well. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 12:33:00 PM

    Beautiful! I love the words that you come up with. They are so different than the same old, same old that I have. Thank you for stopping by. :o)

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 9:00:00 AM

    As always you you have come up with a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 7:08:00 AM

    WOW!! Now this is an incredible and fabulous write my friend, you have amazed me by your delightfully wonderful poem Nette! I truly loved reading this phenomenal piece this morning! What a glorious poem! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 3:35:00 AM

    When it's dark it always shine light... But when it light you can't always see progress JCMT

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 12:38:00 AM

    Captivating as always, nette! Thank you!

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 5:38:00 PM

    There's light piercing through this darkness of thought... Love the title, Nette. Exceptional wordplay, ALWAYS! SML, a fan!

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 5:36:00 PM

    this just has to be poetry at it's best nette, such grace in your words, those that flow right to the very end....

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 4:40:00 PM

    Great rhythm and flow in this one..Enjoyed reading this today..One of your best..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 4:39:00 PM

    so beautiful as always....love the contrasts..love,Deb

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 1:58:00 PM

    - A work that glows .... such only you can describe .... well done, as always! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) <3