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A God Among Men

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A God Among Men

Oh, his eyes- as blue as oceans;
Like icy skies, vast and frozen
With just a gaze, my Heart fell molten-
His skin was pale, though mostly golden

His body was bawdy, and perfect oddly
Like the Statue of David- a carbon copy!
His arms were charmed, to me belonged-
A desired physique, firm yet rocky

Were his abs, strong and rippled,
My love for him more than tripled!
As a specimen- a God among men-
Lo! His embrace, leaves me crippled...

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  1. Date: 10/24/2013 1:33:00 PM
    Chan You bad boy. writing such steamy words. LOL Nice write about your special someone. Glad my Moon Madness poem made you chuckle. But I am not a nympho. I am too sweet to be one. LOL Hugs

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    Date: 10/24/2013 1:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol I loved your poem "Moon Madness" :) Thanks for the review, sweet pea! <3
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 7:59:00 AM
    Archaic!!! You're a great Poet. Your writ flows so smooth and the message flowery.....Check out for my poem: Pop corn Music, in which you feature... Friend JM

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    Date: 10/16/2013 8:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I always look forward to your reviews, Joseph; many thanks! I will check out your poem here in just a few :)
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 7:58:00 AM
    Archaic!!! You're a great Poet. Your writ flows so smooth and the message flowery.....Friend JM

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 10:47:00 PM
    sweeping thoughts nicely penned, AP

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    Date: 10/15/2013 5:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Doc! :)
  1. Date: 10/14/2013 1:50:00 PM
    Awesome write! Great description of this 'somebody' haha-Patrick Farley IV

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    Date: 10/15/2013 5:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Patrick; I appreciate the review! :)
  1. Date: 10/14/2013 12:30:00 PM
    WOW! Quite explicit in its description of desire and admiration...Great write

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    Date: 10/14/2013 12:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks, Eileen; thank you for the review :)
  1. Date: 10/14/2013 11:52:00 AM
    If there is such thing as a spoken serenade, then this may be how one will sound. Swept me off my feet there! It's full of sweet and honest admiration.

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    Date: 10/14/2013 12:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Jake. It's a tribute to our threesome partner that comes about once a week to see my partner and I :)