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Ocean

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Ocean

The Ocean is like a herd of  bulls coming this way.
They run and don't stop, as they pass and never look
back.

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  1. Date: 11/3/2013 5:16:00 AM

    Nice freehand kudos.

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 11:55:00 AM

    Never quite saw the ocean that way, nice perspective you've illustrated with your words! MC

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 10:06:00 AM

    hmmm well I know that when I'm in the ocean and the waves are crashing over me, it sometimes feels like a herd of bulls running over me! lol But for some reason, it's fun to endure! I love the big waves of the ocean. Anyway, yes it's an interesting metaphor here, great job!

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 6:49:00 PM

    Nice & unusual metaphor! Light & Love

    gomez Avatar lisa gomez Date: 10/14/2013 8:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ty
  1. Date: 10/14/2013 8:55:00 AM

    A very sweet perspective on this power of Earth. Nicely done!

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 5:24:00 PM

    A pleasant read on a fall eve. Light & Love