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My love story

My love story....... Where do I start my love story What you want to know about my love story How can I tell about my sad love story When I start to tell then my tears roll down She was there always for me like an angel I could hold her in my arm I could hug her with my heart I could kiss her tenderly She gave her unconditional love with passion She was the world to me I have walked with her every moment and the mountains and oceans opened their heart for us What a wonderful day when I was with her Those days were the best days of my life But till the Satan separated me from her I did not know that her sickness will end her life She cannot see the tears in my eyes neither the pain in my heart that cries for her everyday My love story ends into an incomplete story. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved

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  1. Date: 10/25/2013 7:23:00 AM
    Ravi this is emotionally touching piece. Your heart is poured into each line of the love you have inside. Peace.&.Blessings always, affectionately Cherie.

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 12:13:00 PM
    my heart bleed while reading this love story of yours friend Ravi. Is this for real? thanks for sharing..Good day

    Sathasivam Avatar Ravi Sathasivam
    Date: 10/23/2013 11:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 10/16/2013 1:19:00 PM
    A touching story well-penned, Ravi. This is good poetry, my friend. Licia :-)

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    Date: 10/23/2013 11:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 10/14/2013 10:39:00 AM
    WOW this is a very special write and emotionally written. I loved this write I could feel your love story through your words. this is what poetry is suppose to be about passion. Thank you also for your comments on my poems.

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    Date: 10/23/2013 11:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 10/14/2013 7:40:00 AM
    truly emotional is this Ravi, wonderfully penned and a joy to read.....

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    Date: 10/23/2013 11:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 10/14/2013 1:38:00 AM
    A very beautiful & lovely sad poem this is my dear friend Ravi. I love it and so enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Thank you so much for sharing! Thanks as well for your precious time stopping by my work. Have a wonderful day! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

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  1. Date: 10/13/2013 8:07:00 PM
    Ravi, deep........... and sad... thank you for the kind visit.... SKAT

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  1. Date: 10/13/2013 6:45:00 PM
    This is so sad - yet it is a story of love. Your love is already sealed here and beyound. God will bless you always. Thankis for sharing this story with us.... Lucilla

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  1. Date: 10/13/2013 6:39:00 PM
    I can feel the emotion within the lines..It is really hard to lose the one we love to a terrible illness and death..Great work about the topic..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

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  1. Date: 10/13/2013 9:23:00 AM
    such a poignant poem, straight from the heart and the sadness lingers...but I believe she can see you and feel your pain....hugs

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    Date: 10/23/2013 11:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 10/13/2013 8:58:00 AM
    So sad, Ravi. but it was a beautiful story and the story will have a continuation in heaven!

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    Date: 10/23/2013 11:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 10/13/2013 8:12:00 AM
    - My heart cries for this sad "love story" - Touching written with beautiful memories of happiness that died. - Have a nice Sunday Ravi, all the best to you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Sathasivam Avatar Ravi Sathasivam
    Date: 10/13/2013 8:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comment Anne. I always look for your comment because it gives my pen more strength. Appreciated. Hugs and kisses