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1545: Memory of Sky

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1545: Memory of Sky

I was floating across the golden plains. I can clearly hear the zephyr calling An amber veil drapes the horizon's veins Golden at the warm touch of the sky king A defiant gaze from the firmament Physicality succumbs to numbness I couldn't move or utter a lament As his light slowly turned into dimness #1545: MEMORY OF SKY ©Jake Ponce [January 6, 2012, 03:15 PM]

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  1. Date: 10/13/2013 10:44:00 AM
    beautiful write, rich with images...welcome to soup :)

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 6:47:00 AM
    Really has an elegant, regal feel to it. Beautiful imagery and emotion. If the two rhyming pieces I've read by you are any indication of your flair and aptitude for rhyme, then I hope you consider writing more. You have a cool style; great write :)