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I Hope You Suffer

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I Hope You Suffer

I hope one day you suffer
I hope one day you burn
I hope  one day you pay
For the love you have spurned

I hope you feel the torment
I hope you feel jagged thorn
I hope that you long to die
As in sackcloth black you mourn

I hope you feel less than dirt
I hope you twist with such pain
I hope betrayal drives you
Stark raving mad and insane

I hope one day you're haunted
I hope in terror you scream
I hope at nighttime you see
A nightmare in place of dream

I hope one day SOON you bleed
With a spear thrust in your side
Wounded for killing my love
Your soul not able to hide

Yes, it may be pure evil
It may be a heinous crime
But for my heart's rejection
I hope you get to do time

Yes, I hope that you suffer
I hope that you wail and weep
It will soothe my aching heart
That you didn’t want to keep

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 10/14/2013 1:43:00 PM

    powerful piece of writing excellent piece

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 9:31:00 PM

    Wow WOW Wow, Well done and I also give you a hug!!!!

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 6:05:00 PM

    I likes this, can hear you screaaming this at some poor unfortunate guy lol, I think you've typed 'you' instead of 'one' in the third line, see, I take in every word you write. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 4:44:00 PM

    Ow gee sometimes when im very angry i sound so much like your verse but then when I calm down I see things differently.This is very deep.Lets roar girl and scare the lion away..big smile : )

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 4:35:00 PM

    wow! i'd hate to be on the receiving end of this! you've gotten a lot of your anger out here, though, which is a great place to do so...

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 10:03:00 AM

    Wowser!! You should add "But other than that you're a great guy"! LOL Powerful stuff!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/13/2013 1:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Craig. Sometimes it's good to vent, right? We can't be "good" all the time. Thanks for the visit.
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 9:35:00 AM

    Wow. I could clearly and distinctly feel the scorn and enmity you are conveying here. Very strong, spiteful and venomous; I can absolutely relate to these feelings. Great job articulating your malice! Kudos :)

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/13/2013 1:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow! Malice...pretty strong word. I would say it was just a hope that the person gets a taste of his own medicine. But...You call it as you see it. Thanks for dropping by.
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 9:04:00 AM

    yep, I would say a lot of us feel that way when rejected. ME LIKES

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/13/2013 1:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, dear Andrea. Glad that you have saved me from being seen as a monster. I think these are natural feelings. How we deal with them is completely another matter. Hugs
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 8:39:00 AM

    - Yes, there is a lot of pain in this poem Eileen ..... power full written! - All the best to you dear friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/13/2013 2:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Sunshine. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Pain lets us know we are still alive and alerts us to trouble, so....I guess we can't live without it. Hugs
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 6:48:00 AM

    I can feel your pain with every word within this tremendous write my friend! Wow, the power behind your lines is so amazing I can surely feel your heartache! I loved reading this awesome poem this morning Eileen! What a glorious piece, Great Work!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/13/2013 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Russell....being able to empathize is a very beautiful thing. Hugs
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 3:15:00 AM

    I hadn't felt such a mightily devastating fire for ages. Superbly composed! May such devils reside in Hell now and hereafter!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/13/2013 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, A.H. Your commendation is very high indeed. If all who were deserving would reside in hell, we would all be condemned to go there. We all hurt and reject....to varying degrees, but it is sweet of you to come to my defense. Take care
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 1:43:00 AM

    A poem of passion and angst. Well written

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 10/13/2013 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Justice, you bring me joy