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I Will Remember

Barbara Gorelick Avatar Barbara Gorelick - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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I Will Remember


We walked the path, our hearts did follow, I will remember 
And stopped to rest beneath the willow, I will remember

Blessed by the rains that fell in those early springs 
The evenings we watched the river flow, I will remember

Through the years the harvest songs were sung
Reaping then, the bounty that did grow, I remember

Time  grows short and comes the shadows
But  in your eyes the love I know, I will remember

For all the days to follow these, I will remember
The  days of joy and days of woe, I will remember

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  1. Date: 11/15/2013 11:10:00 AM
    Barbara, Congratulations, on your 'Take the Leap' win............ LOVE ~ SKAT ~

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 12:47:00 PM
    Barbara, I like your use of end rhyme in this wonderful ghazal, it acts as an affirmation, very well done. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 8:59:00 PM
    such a poignant write from the heart... memories always live on when etched through our heart and mind...great write...congrats on your win! :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 7:09:00 AM
    Packed with touching emotions Barbara--Kudos!

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 3:13:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win, Barbara

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 5:29:00 AM
    Wow as an indian i love ghazals and yors was splendid romantic with the ghazal refrain u chose. Warm regards. Pls do review my latest poem.

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 1:57:00 PM
    Barbara, this is beautiful! Way to go! You made this form look easy, your poem flows effortlessly...best wishes in the contest. Love and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 9:46:00 PM
    A difficult form, Barbara and I am yet to try it

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 7:57:00 PM
    Hey Barb, the first 2 lines must BOTH end in, I will remember with the rhyme for [willow before it on line 1 too.] Otherwise you got it. hugs! Light & Love

    Gorelick Avatar Barbara Gorelick
    Date: 10/12/2013 9:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Deb.. I got confused.. lol. BG
  1. Date: 10/12/2013 4:51:00 PM
    A really nice poem you have written here Barbara. Sometimes it is nice to remember things, and others it is better to forget. Thanks for the read....Peter