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Spreading the Seed

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Spreading the Seed

Soon he'll come with salty sums,
By the gallon--by the ton!
Instinct decrees he spread the seed-
Nothing else could be more fun!

A Rain of white blinds my sight,
Unless, of course, I swallow...
And I'm certain I just might-
Do it all again tomorrow!

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  1. Date: 12/20/2013 4:34:00 PM
    Chan The Man You naughty naughty boy. Trying to disguise your badness in between poem lines. You need to be spanked. HHHMM NO you might like that. HEE HEE Thanks for the sweet and kind comment on my Towed My Heart Away Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

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    Date: 12/21/2013 8:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL! I love being dirty without being dirty! ;)
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 7:13:00 PM
    Must I understand or can I run away without understanding anything at all? I'd prefer the second choice but I'm afraid it's too late! I did open Pandora's box, it seems...What will happen to me Clever write! Hahaha!

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    Date: 10/23/2013 7:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, V! ;)
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 5:22:00 PM
    I had no idea such an experience could be so poetically engaging... also, see last line of the first verse. Did you mean "Nothing" instead of Noting?

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/14/2013 8:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ARGH! Thanks for catching that, Karen. I'm usually good at proof-reading, but that one slipped right passed me. It's so much fun to be vulgar without being explicit lol ;) <3
  1. Date: 10/12/2013 11:42:00 PM
    I. LOVE. THIS!!!

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    Date: 10/13/2013 6:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol Thanks, Jake. It's a bit "naughtier" than the subjects I usually write about, but I found it fun writing this. I like being vulgar in a "read between the lines" kind of way. Really happy you enjoyed; thanks for the review :)