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  1. Date: 10/15/2013 6:07:00 PM
    I'm waiting for you to tell me where that one poem is. When I typed in the title and your name I could not find it.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 10/15/2013 10:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Soup mail
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 3:39:00 PM
    i love this poem, especially the second line - just adorable! ~ i have to thank you so much for your unwavering support. your comments are all the "affirmation" i need! much appreciated.....ilene

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 10/13/2013 7:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I also thank you dear ilene you as well encourage me. You are a dear soul.
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 9:50:00 AM
    This is good, Sometimes we don't think too much about ants. They are very hard working creature. They work only for their food. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 10/13/2013 10:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your lovely comment
  1. Date: 10/12/2013 4:05:00 PM
    They are going to FEAST. This one is cute and clever.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 10/12/2013 5:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea
  1. Date: 10/12/2013 11:59:00 AM
    One of Mother Nature's/God's most fascinating creatures - I have been known to sit for hours and watch them at their work! Loved it, Jon, you conjured up a great picture of activity :)

    Wattle Avatar Miss Wattle
    Date: 10/12/2013 1:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again for visiting my page, Jon - I'm always happy to see your smiling face :)
    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 10/12/2013 1:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you
  1. Date: 10/12/2013 11:26:00 AM
    - The ant is skilled and a real work, nice poem about ant Jon. - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 10/12/2013 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dear sweet anne lise. I love to write poems about insects and animals.
  1. Date: 10/12/2013 9:42:00 AM
    Very funny but realistic picture, Jon

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 10/12/2013 1:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ooops, Thank you.
    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 10/12/2013 1:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANKS YOU
  1. Date: 10/12/2013 9:35:00 AM
    Hi, Jon. Fun and clever write from you. May I make a suggestion? What about, "And soon the pie was laid to waste"? I also think the third line is a little lumpy; I would consider reworking it a bit. But I enjoyed this piece; good job and kudos! :)

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 10/12/2013 1:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your suggestions are always welcome here. I re-read my poem and saw too that it needed revision. Thanks.
  1. Date: 10/12/2013 8:28:00 AM
    And bit by bit, vast mountains are washed to the sea... Terry

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 10/12/2013 2:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, Terry haven't heard from you for a while. Thank you for your visit.