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Passion

Stars shining brightly in the night sky.
Sweaty palms and butterflies.
 Deep in silent thoughts, while our
lips meet.
 So close in touch I can feel his 
heartbeat.
 Slowly pulling me in with every 
breath we take.
 Holding me in his arms as I begin to 
shake.
 Gently laying me down in the summers
grass.
 Taking our time, making this moment 
last.
 Our bodies intertwined like the twisting of a rope,
his hands firmly grasping my hair.
 Looking into each others eyes as we passionately 
make love in the warm night air.

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  1. Date: 11/3/2013 5:23:00 AM

    Steamy Erotic Tantalizing Loved it. Bravo

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 9:18:00 PM

    Ah, here we see passion overcoming and overwhelming! Keep on writing Lisa! MC

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 7:19:00 AM

    - Lisa, I love this one !!! - Beautiful poem ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 2:38:00 AM

    Hum§ Bodies, hands, hair...eyes! wOOw...what a romance! I like it, a real delight to the sense of imagination <3 Have a beautiful day, Rita SR.

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 6:25:00 PM

    loved it-wouldn't change a thing

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 4:22:00 AM

    Its nice..but work on the last lines..it don't fit into above ..

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 4:55:00 PM

    Hi Lisa, Lovely poesia romantica.. Ken

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 9:53:00 AM

    Very passionate piece. My only suggestion to make this piece flow better would be to rework the last 4 lines. I would add more length and detail (imagery or emotion) to lines 15 and 16, so it evens out the beat and rhythm. Overall, good poem that I enjoyed; kudos :)

    gomez Avatar lisa gomez Date: 10/12/2013 12:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ok I reworked it. ty for ur feedback.