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Senryu 2

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Senryu 2

	
	
	
	Senryu 2
	
	
	broken old man 
	pacing the back yard fence 
	talking to himself
	
	

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  1. Date: 11/11/2013 8:41:00 PM

    Excellent, Jack! A sad but common scene...congrats to you! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 11/11/2013 9:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the comment. Yes, all too common... Jack
  1. Date: 11/9/2013 10:39:00 AM

    Good morning Jack, i think I know this old man.... :) congrats... , xox~ LINDA

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 11/9/2013 11:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A lot of us know him. Thanks... Jack
  1. Date: 11/9/2013 9:02:00 AM

    I could see this image unfold...good one, congrats on your win :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 11/9/2013 9:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Sandra...
  1. Date: 11/8/2013 9:55:00 PM

    I think the original Japanese senryu masters would be very pleased with this piece which is in their traditional style. Congrats on a fine piece of writing and on your win!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 11/8/2013 10:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the wonderful compliment, John... Jack
  1. Date: 11/8/2013 6:03:00 PM

    Such a sad picture, but a great write! Congrats on your win, Jack! Love, Kim

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 11/8/2013 10:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Kim...
  1. Date: 11/8/2013 8:36:00 AM

    Very nice senryu here Jack!Congrats on the win.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 11/8/2013 10:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks. I appreciate the comment... jack
  1. Date: 11/7/2013 11:05:00 PM

    ha I Know this old man ----Just Kidding... Jack, Congratulations, on your win........ LOVE ~SKAT~

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 11/7/2013 11:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Skat. As I said to John, I understand him now... Jack
  1. Date: 11/7/2013 6:55:00 PM

    That describes me in my younger days... Congratulations, my friend.... Jake

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 11/7/2013 11:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    he was my grandfather. Now I can appreciate his condition... Jack
  1. Date: 11/7/2013 6:16:00 PM

    Poor man..good write and congrats. BG

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 4:24:00 PM

    Gotta love it. Congrats, Jack!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 11/7/2013 4:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Juliet...
  1. Date: 11/7/2013 3:32:00 PM

    Congratulations to you in Susan's contest. Good to see you on the list.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 11/7/2013 4:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Andrea...
  1. Date: 10/12/2013 3:52:00 PM

    a very visual one!!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 10/12/2013 4:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My grandfather... Jack
  1. Date: 10/11/2013 6:16:00 PM

    very well written senryu :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 10/11/2013 6:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for reading and commenting... Jack