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unspoken thoughts

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unspoken thoughts

Will I wakeup from this pain,
will this be my last breath?
As I close my eyes the light 
begins to fade into darkness
and my failures flash before me.
As I lay in agony and sadness,
were you even aware of my shattered heart?
Or were you just to blind to notice what was 
staring you in the face the whole time?
Will the guilt of not speaking up or 
not being there when I needed you the most
come rushing over you when you realize I am no longer 
there?

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  1. Date: 11/3/2013 5:36:00 AM
    Very deep mama. Applauds.

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 8:01:00 PM
    Lisa---Such a well-penned verse that describes unspoken thoughts in a most beautiful way~~~congrats on your win! Much deserved! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 1:05:00 PM
    Lisa, :) Enjoyed your free verse win.......... Love ~ SKAT ~

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 10:00:00 AM
    Pain is so present and believable in your poem. I think it would make great lyrics for an Evanescence song. Great job! CTB

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 10:25:00 PM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, lisa

    gomez Avatar lisa gomez
    Date: 10/21/2013 11:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty and congrats to u as well
  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:14:00 PM
    Lisa, , CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "FREE VERSE" contest <----- Had fun reading your WIN!! If you'd like:-) Enjoy my latest blog! "THE FOOL" :) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=17055&PoetID=18720 xoxox-------take care & enjoy your coming week. <3 Linda <3

    gomez Avatar lisa gomez
    Date: 10/20/2013 10:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty and I will check ur blog out. U have a good week as.well. Xox
  1. Date: 10/20/2013 8:39:00 PM
    sometimes someone must lose another to realize the gem they held...poignant piece, one can feel the pain...hugs

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 12:12:00 AM
    This is a deep and powerful write You took the reader on an emotional roller coaster. Nice job