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apple pickin time

                   
             

           Walking through the many ripe apple tress ,holding secrets
           I pick a bushel thinking of my love through the misty breeze
           Apple pickin time in the Valley called Naples, awaits a meeting
           For my love will arrive by the Valley in red that meets the sun falling

           At my laced boot some fine wine, a love note tied through my hair
           The secret love not shared would be tragic in heart and mind.
           following the paths through the many trees in line , apple pickin time
           all embraced, the colors of Fall enhances my only dream ..

           It is apple pickin time in the passion of leaves love enlightened
           I pick my apples with pride knowing soon , my love at my side
           It has been a long neglected dream, a fear follows desire held in secret 
           no longer able to fight this burning fire,  a risk taken , all ethics aside 

          Walking through the many ripe apple trees , holding secrets
          I pick a bushel thinking of my love through the misty breeze
          Apple pickin time in the Valley called Naples , awaits a meeting
          For my love will arrive by the Valley in red that meets the sun falling 

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  1. Date: 11/12/2013 5:50:00 PM

    Way to go..Congrats on your winning work.Sara

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 11/13/2013 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank-you my kind friend and poetess! You are full of encouragement , and loving others !! I love that about you Sara , for you are truly a writer. SR.
  1. Date: 11/11/2013 10:19:00 AM

    Yea Yvette, another well deserved win!

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 11/13/2013 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My Muse , teacher and Friend ..here on the soup , you never cease to depress me !! As I write , hearing "A test of the ER system " expecting one day for this not to be a test ! We should do a contest on that ! SR.
  1. Date: 11/9/2013 5:26:00 PM

    Shanity, Awesome Apple Pickin' Time Win................ SKAT ~ LOVE ~

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 11/13/2013 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Skat ..Thank-you ! If I have not said it , I love your pro pic, you are beautiful~ Inside and outside . SR.
  1. Date: 11/9/2013 12:02:00 PM

    I enjoyed the mystique and anticipation of meeting the love by the Valley in red. Well done. Congrats on your win :)

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 11/9/2013 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oh yes , isn't that a Kodak moment ! We all wish we could stay there for a while;)
  1. Date: 11/9/2013 4:05:00 AM

    Congrats on the win , Shanity

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 11/9/2013 12:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank-you Dr :)
  1. Date: 10/15/2013 6:01:00 PM

    ahhh, you did a romantic one!! Very nice.

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 10/16/2013 9:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are adorable !!
    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 10/16/2013 12:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank-you ..having to dig deep ;)
  1. Date: 10/12/2013 1:01:00 PM

    Sounds like a delicious undertaking. Well expressed and a bit naughty!

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 10/14/2013 11:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank-you , and finally edited !
    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 10/13/2013 12:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank-you Richard , I was trying to do that..my writings can be a bit sad !
  1. Date: 10/12/2013 7:01:00 AM

    A marvelous crispy appley poem so enchanting and gorgeous! Enjoyd each crunchy line. Pls do review my latest too.:)

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 10/13/2013 12:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I definitely will , you are an amazing Poet ! Thank-you , every comment means the World to me . I wish I had 1 month , just to read and write ! What a life that would be , on the Soup !
  1. Date: 10/11/2013 2:55:00 PM

    such a beautiful write

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 10/11/2013 5:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank-you my very sweet friend !
  1. Date: 10/11/2013 10:34:00 AM

    you bring magical romance to apple pickin' time, shanity... nature's way of showing her abundance and generosity...this is simply smashin'.. :) huggs

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 10/11/2013 5:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank-you my beautiful poetess , I love all you say , with such poetic beauty !