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Heart of the Sea

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Heart of the Sea

Crashing of the waves 
Slamming against each other,
As the moon lights up the darkness 
In the distance.
Your thoughts are carried away 
Into the Heart of the Sea.
Secrets to be held
Only to be found if searched for.
Lying across the ocean floor 
Like treasures and sadness bound together.

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  1. Date: 4/6/2014 6:21:00 PM
    This is one good poem. Thanks for sharing and welcome to Poetry Soup... LUcilla

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 7:54:00 AM
    Great first poem for the soup. Welcome to the soup Lisa.

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 5:40:00 AM
    Sounds like my internal battles on my single days lol Good one.

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 1:20:00 AM
    Nice words...nice comparision :)

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 10:17:00 AM
    Hi Lisa, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 1:27:00 AM
    Lisa, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 8:04:00 PM
    Lisa---Yet another remarkable poem that describes feelings well....loved your line, "Lying across the ocean floor, like treasures and sadness bound together." Nice metaphor! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 1:29:00 AM
    Hard to picture but I get the metaphor.

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 3:30:00 PM
    Lisa, Welcome to Soup. I'm also very new, and truly love your entry. Great Job. I can't wait to read more. CTB

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 11:21:00 PM
    I really love this one. Didn't it win? gosh, that is one harsh judge.

    gomez Avatar lisa gomez
    Date: 10/20/2013 10:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty, there was alot a good ones maybe next time.
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 12:42:00 PM
    Wonderful use of imagery! So deep!

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 10:26:00 AM
    a very deep poem Lisa, I love it!!! .. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 9:39:00 AM
    This is flat out beautiful. You captured the very, very fragile balance of love & pain. Wonderfully done! It's nice to meet you! =)

    gomez Avatar lisa gomez
    Date: 10/11/2013 11:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty :)
  1. Date: 10/11/2013 3:46:00 AM
    Welcome to P-Soup, Lisa ! - Nice to read your first poem here.- Luck in contest! - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 3:34:00 AM
    this is nice, , Lisa,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

    gomez Avatar lisa gomez
    Date: 10/11/2013 11:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty
  1. Date: 10/11/2013 1:10:00 AM
    A nice poem with good imagery

    gomez Avatar lisa gomez
    Date: 10/11/2013 11:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty
  1. Date: 10/11/2013 12:31:00 AM
    awesome

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 12:21:00 AM
    loved this one, beautiful!

    gomez Avatar lisa gomez
    Date: 10/11/2013 11:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty