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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 4/18/2014 7:25:00 PM
    Amazing story. I hung on every word! :)

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 6:02:00 PM
    I can see why this was a winner, outstanding writing. You might appreciate my poem "Dark Lover" I enjoyed reading this masterpiece, I think it is one of your best.

    clarke Avatar michael clarke
    Date: 4/3/2014 5:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Richard, thanks for dropping by and the comment. I shall try to drop by on your piece tonight, If not, I shall drop by on It tomorrow. Here we have a fallen Angel who escapes from Hell on Halloween. He knows how he can be redeemed, he must win the Love of a mortal woman. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.
  1. Date: 1/14/2014 6:02:00 PM
    I have added you to my Favorite poets list.

    clarke Avatar michael clarke
    Date: 4/3/2014 4:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Richard, hopefully by next week I should be back to normal. Hey, I wonder If this favourite thing gets re arranged when your disk drive goes on the fritz. I'm sure I had you on mine. Had to get a new machine. Of course you'll still be there. The seed of doubt Is planted I have to go and check. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.
  1. Date: 11/10/2013 4:07:00 PM
    I like your poetic expression in this piece... nice vivid images penned within...congrats on your win :)

    clarke Avatar michael clarke
    Date: 12/3/2013 3:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Sandra, thanks for dropping by and the comment. Even in Hell, if you wait your moment, the road to freedom and redemption can be opened. The dark man escaped and through the help of one woman he was redeemed. The magic still lives. Thanks for the Congrats. I forgot this one had been in a contest. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend....MIKE.
  1. Date: 11/10/2013 12:49:00 AM
    Congrats on the win,

    clarke Avatar michael clarke
    Date: 12/3/2013 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Ram, Thanks for dropping by and the comment. It seems a while ago since this one was in a contest, I didn't even remember. A mind like a sieve, most definitely. Thanks for the congrats. I can remember writing it, took a few days. He is now redeemed and the Dark Man writes again. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Griend....MIKE.
  1. Date: 11/9/2013 6:42:00 PM
    Congrats to you and your imaginative story!

    clarke Avatar michael clarke
    Date: 11/12/2013 3:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Andrea, thanks for dropping by and the comment and the congrats. This one has grains of truth sprinkled throughout it. There was a man who fell far into his own inner darkness. Slowly a woman helped him back into the light, through her Love. Sometimes this man wants to go back to his darkness to hide. Now he walks the shadows spreading light. Catch you later. Your Friend....MIKE.
  1. Date: 11/9/2013 5:14:00 PM
    Michael, Congratulations on your awesome Halloween win. Love ~ SKAT~

    clarke Avatar michael clarke
    Date: 11/9/2013 6:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Skat, thanks for the placing and the congrats, and for hosting the contest. You got some good stuff in this one. The Dark man found his way to heaven again and now he walks the shadows doing God's work. The shadow people exist, not only in imagination. I wonder if I was around when Vlad was young. Life can be strange. Have a good day. Catch you later....MIKE.
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 3:19:00 PM
    A very creative write, enjoyed xxx

    clarke Avatar michael clarke
    Date: 10/11/2013 5:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Rose, thanks for dropping by and the comment. An Angel did fall. He was saved by a woman. Halloween, Satan has his doors opened and all sallie forth into the dark of a mortal world. Love can be found in the strangest places Rose, by the strangest people. Ethereal can Love mortal and vice-versa. Have a nice day Rose. Catch you later. Your Friend....MIKE.