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Delicious



You've heard the word “delicious” before But until I met you, my love It didn't exist till I shouted it out loud When you gave my heart a big shove There are other new words that I've created Like “yummy” or even “sweetie” All these words are now used extensively By lovers scrawling graffiti There's some though I can't mention here They're monitoring what we write No naughtiness, my wrists'll surely get slapped But I sometimes slip 'em in, in spite A word that's on the borderline is “bum' It's sometimes acceptable how it's used Like using it to describe a “bum” on the street Not your ass, don't get confused Oops! I believe I might've messed up Maybe they weren't paying attention They were too busy checking everybody else And I won't receive a detention You've heard the word “delicious” before © Jack Ellison 2013

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  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:14:00 AM
    You are so witty and funny, I love it.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 10/20/2013 9:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm here EVERY day, come back anytime... please!!! Big hugs, Jack xox
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 1:43:00 PM
    Loved it, Jack! What a "delicious" love this sounds, to have given your heart such a big shove - I hope it's worth the potential detention from "above"! xox

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 10/10/2013 1:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oooops so sorry Miss Wattle, Licia's ended up here by mistake! Bad Jack... Bad Jack!!!! Even your reviews are poetic... "potential detention" LOL Dirty big hugs, Kenny xoxox
    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 10/10/2013 1:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    WOO HOO! Great hearing from you "Delicious Licia"!!!!! LOL I will check out your "Show Time"... big big hugs, Jacko xoxox
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 1:40:00 PM
    lol. Straight to detention, foul-mouthed poet. "Delicious" is one of my nicknames. I think you've also called me such a number of times. Check out my "Show time" and follow the link. Love your fun poetry, Jack. Licia :-)

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 10/10/2013 1:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    WOO HOO! Great hearing from you "Delicious Licia"!!!!! LOL I will check out your "Show Time"... big big hugs, Jacko xoxox
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 12:39:00 PM
    Nice job Jack, I like it!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 10/10/2013 1:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my friend... you're welcome any time! Cheers!
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 12:10:00 PM
    You are naughty, my dear...but so so sweet. :) Yes....your writes are all delicious and yummy! Now...do stay away from the b...m....and all will be well! HA HA! Love ya!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 10/10/2013 1:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL Sorry for the naughty stuff, Teach! Do I have to stay after clss??? Love ya back Miss Boop! xoxox Kenny
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 9:52:00 AM
    OhOh! Food names like sweetie and delicious are hard on Dragons' mind... Put the barbecue sauce down! We're not going any where except to the table for you a second set of pancakes... We do Not eat people... and neither do you! They are names for loved ones and pets... Don't look so horrified we don't eat pets either! They're nick names! Silly Dragon!... No! You can't play go find all the bums on the street! And Dogasaurus would NOT like being named BUM! Really! I'll explain later... LOL

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 10/10/2013 9:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yummmmmm! love pancakes!!!!!! Happy to hear he's not a people eater!!! LOL xoxoxox
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 8:29:00 AM
    this has everything and more Jack I love your naughty humour gets a 7 from me hugs Shadow x smile

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 10/10/2013 8:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the 7 and your kind words my dear Shadow!!! Big hugs from across the sea! xox
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 8:27:00 AM
    If they're "monitoring what we write", to me, that would be MORE reason to say it...it could teach "Big Brother" how to be a little more open-hearted & bold. ;-) Awesome piece!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 10/10/2013 8:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    "Big Brother is watching" LOL Thank you my good friend Drake... liked you comments!
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 7:44:00 AM
    This is a truly delicious write my friend! I really loved reading this tremendous and stupendous poem this morning! What a superior piece, you have written a splendid poem, Great Work!!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 10/10/2013 7:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Much appreciated my friend AGAIN! Thank's