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Can't let you go

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Can't let you go

I want you to visit your mind 
And look into my eyes,
There you will find me staring 
back at you,
These eyes saying i miss you,
My heart is doing a lap dance 
in the presence of the lungs 
and it's breath taking.
I feel a sharp pain when i see 
your heart go up in smoke,
A flame flicking behind the 
facade of your smile,
As my mind takes a walk into 
this tiny island of yours,
Searching for the coolest spot 
where i can ponder upon 
these thoughts,
Whilst sitting on that corner 
couch listening to your 
heartbeat.
Too terrified to even begin to 
remember,
That it used to rain,
And rivers of fresh water, 
Used to engulf your rich lands,
Before the sun wrecked havoc 
and ravaged.
Now tears and blood fill this 
lake 
When you cry and bleed.
I feel like it's time 
For the humble boy in me,
To kiss the stupid little girl in 
you,
Till you yearn for more,
Till you can't let go,
Because i can't take it no more,
I'm disgusted of seeing you go 
in and out of relationships,
Again and again,
Like a *****.

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  1. Date: 11/11/2013 8:51:00 AM
    wow, Kinda this brings knots to my stomach. You are very expressive and real.... I like the way you go in fresh and then came out with a strong punch... great.... love the ending.... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 2:31:00 AM
    Amazing how words can paint with no paint but thoughts. I like your style