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Change of Season

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Change of Season

It's the changing of the season
You should of told me.

I've worn out all my welcomes.
So I don't love you anymore.

I won't be knocking on your door.
Yes, you say you won't forget me.

I see it's the rainbow moon out tonight.
Though the summer days drifted off site.

You might forget me towards morning light.
For I shall have already forgotten you.

I've watched you many times come and go.
Through the shadows of the crystal moon.

I trace the memory of your face in my dreams.
I stare at the picture of you on the nightstand.

Feel the coldness of you come over me.
As the mystical lovers moon shines outside my window.


10/07/ 2013  12midnight

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  1. Date: 3/2/2014 12:40:00 PM
    A very nice poem. Sometimes things are just not meant to be. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 11:53:00 PM
    we seem to spend some time together, alas one of two must leave, we grow apart ...seperate, surrender, another's time to grieve, the mood is sometimes blue, when looking back remember, good times we received that warm december..... too. Don re Debbie Duncan "Change of Season"

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 10:50:00 PM
    They said there was going to be a lunar eclipse during the last full moon. Somehow, I did not see it. Your nice write reminded me of that night not too long ago.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/27/2013 2:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading Robert, I never seen any eclipse either , was disappointed myself ;}
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 8:32:00 AM
    You asked about old cold men of the woods. Yes, it must have won. I saw congratulations there but not sure if it did very well!! Let me see if I can find any poems of yours I have not read.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/22/2013 6:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I know my Fairy Tales poem won 5th place ;}
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 12:40:00 AM
    Mystical way of showin u luv him n luv him not, like sayin i damn care, but stil cant forget as if nothin hapend. Very nice fine poem, pal

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/22/2013 2:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ;}
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 7:00:00 PM
    This has the romance of great 60's love song, loved it alot. I'm glad you enjoyed my Beatles peom it's written with alot of feeling.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/22/2013 2:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading cherl ;}
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 11:29:00 PM
    Hi Debbie; I love this. it's a great poem. Sometimes we change with the Seasons. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/19/2013 12:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Lucilla ;}
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 11:58:00 AM
    dreamy , dreamy... the moonlight brings magic to your sweet pining,deb... a rich pile of work!..:) huggs

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/18/2013 12:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you nette ;}
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 7:13:00 AM
    Captures you from the first line thru to the last word....beautiful....loved it Debbie

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/22/2013 2:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Donna ;}
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 4:28:00 PM
    I loved this poem, Debbie! I like the simplicity of it, mixed with deep emotions. I felt like I was reading a poem of my own! There is such beauty in sadness, sometimes. We may be alone in this world, but the moon is always there for us! Fantastic poetry! Adding it to my favs!...Thank you so much for the great comments!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/18/2013 12:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Kelly ;}
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 5:36:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your creative work this morning..There is a melancoly that floats on the moonlight..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/17/2013 3:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara ;}
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 10:09:00 PM
    reflections 'neath the moonlight.....nicely penned Debbie....thanks for stopping by...

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/17/2013 2:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for coming to read my words ;}
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 4:05:00 PM
    I really like how you created such great imagery in the lines. The mystical lovers moon, picture on the nightstand, coldness of you come over me,,, great contrasts

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/13/2013 5:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Karen ;}
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 1:36:00 PM
    - The love shines through your window ........ a beautiful and romantic poem Debbie. love it! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/14/2013 3:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne Lise ;}
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 10:22:00 AM
    Debbie, this is full of wonderful images, i love the idea of a rainbow moon, very well crafted....David

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/13/2013 12:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you David ;}
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 8:07:00 AM
    I like the way you had the cold moon shining outside the window at the end of this. Very nice one for my Sunday morning.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/13/2013 12:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea ;}
  1. Date: 10/12/2013 5:08:00 AM
    Debbie, your poetry is fun on several levels. A lot of poets have written about the passages of life, but you do it with such passion. You have a lot of feeling and make me feel that there is hope for the human race before we reach the finish line. For that, I thank you kindly.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/12/2013 3:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Duke ;}
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 12:58:00 AM
    Very nice romantic expressions creating apt surrounding Debbie

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/10/2013 2:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading ;}