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  1. Date: 11/20/2013 1:21:00 PM

    You have intended purity and also purified your intentions in this piece. A great one!

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 12:03:00 AM

    I'm glad that you posted this. Love the last line. Thanks for the visit.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 6:36:00 AM

    Nothing needs to be added to this one Marlon, you got your message through loud and clear and as you uniquely as only you can do it :) enjoy the weekend ahead!!

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 8:41:00 AM

    About time we got something new! There is a lot of harsh truth embedded in this piece. How true were the good intentions. Hidden, unkind agendas are the poison of a beating heart. You got me thinking deep on this. Excellent job!

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 10/10/2013 2:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Burdened deficient, makes it good natured!
    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 10/10/2013 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol... I keep a new one, just lazy about posting. The intentions in this piece are nothing but good, but you can see either way. Thanks!
  1. Date: 10/9/2013 10:20:00 PM

    Hi SML............. finally a poem................ I miss you;-) why haven't you read my latest..............SKAT

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 10/9/2013 10:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wassup Mama Skat-XOX.... I miss you also!
    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 10/9/2013 10:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I miss you too, PD!
  1. Date: 10/9/2013 10:16:00 PM

    Hi MMMMMMMMMM LLLLLLLLLL. that's what I love about your poems.... much power in every line... xox... LINDA

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 10:13:00 PM

    Three lines that are deeply laced with meaning. Good write, ML....One wonders what the act might be....hmmmmmm

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 10/9/2013 10:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind words, Eileen!
    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 10/9/2013 10:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you and ditto!
  1. Date: 10/9/2013 9:21:00 PM

    Hi ML, I've missed you, and your wise words.

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 10/9/2013 10:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, your comment went to Eileen!
  1. Date: 10/9/2013 4:57:00 PM

    Scribe, love the philosophy within this poem. Nicely done my friend. Very deep. Hugs and love, Gail

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 10/9/2013 5:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind words, Gail!
  1. Date: 10/9/2013 3:29:00 PM

    - Wisely written, Marlon ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 10/9/2013 5:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Anne Lise!