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My Comet Comes Near Again -

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My Comet Comes Near Again -


I was attracted to her troubles, her artful exits,
her love was terrible, she hurt me in all the right ways,
hides behind the tall tree of my inspiration
whistling like a playful truth easy to please & difficult to release,
say goodbye kindly & curiously as a dream departing under duress,
just when you thought she'd tell you the password to Heaven
she would scamper away as shewolf suspicious of where she lay
or prowling on the scent of prey,
I fell in love with how she fought mistrust and 'bad odds'
teaching me that patience often rests on hurtful wisdom,
but when this woman chooses to gallop into the gallery of my growth
wild and willfully, I quickly comprehend a true friend,
promises and time need not be bartered for
since emotions and experience are the blessings of our bond,
as my Poet Girl grows stronger, sings louder, strides prouder
I ponder happily that the only timepiece the Cosmos holds
is the connection of beating hearts, the affection of unjudging reception,
and now, above the melee of my routine I see her blazing towards me again
not falling near, rather raising me to that innocent & infallible trail
where tears become diamonds & frigidity faints in the arms of faith,
her love is no longer so terrible, more so terrific as temptation,
however, she continues to sharpen her blade on the bone of my breastplate,
and I resist not the mercy of her dangerous kiss  -

J.A.B.

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  1. Date: 7/13/2014 2:26:00 PM
    Oh! I've come again to read this poem....I see from reading the comments the inspiration behind this piece. Fascinating...Very special.

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 7/13/2014 8:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    She's the most special woman in the world. I've always loved how deeply you get into my poetry Elieen...J.A.B.
  1. Date: 7/11/2014 3:01:00 PM
    What a poem...wow!! it took a hold on me and would not let go:)-Love Ettie(ps. Im rating this a seven bc it is just that good and faving you as a poet lolz:)

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 7/11/2014 8:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My Poet Girl is a special danger, a pretty warrior. Ettie you do this love a great justice with the 7, and FAVING me is a fine inspiration, thank you!
  1. Date: 3/27/2014 4:41:00 PM
    patience often rests on hurtful wisdom.... :) awesome write.. :)==olive :)

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 3/29/2014 12:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, the wisdom of believin in the best outcome. She raises me to that innocent and infallible trail. Thanks Olive for feelin the warm wisdom in this write. J.A.B.
  1. Date: 1/30/2014 5:26:00 AM
    "affection of unjudging reception;" a beautiful sentiment not often seen without being a facade. A beautiful piece Justin.

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 1/31/2014 1:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you FJ. for recognizing the purity of my affection, of my intention in this write, I find no need for artifice or fascade when speaking the truth about my POET GIRL, my Sphinx. J.A.B.
  1. Date: 1/22/2014 9:16:00 AM
    Yes,, what a wow Poem... I like how you analyzed the wings of this poet girl... Linda

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 1/22/2014 1:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I love how I need to my Sphinx, The 3rd line from the bottom is my favorite. J.A.B.
  1. Date: 10/26/2013 2:44:00 PM
    Justin, hi how are you? I don't know why but, i love this one so much.. I as a poet sharpen my blade, and face all odds... This is a lovely dedicated poem, for our lovely JAY, I imagine... She sure is a mystery... You have so many poetess adoring your brilliant mind... Your ending line falls like a falling star, right into the heart of the unknown.... Justin if you ever are on line, would you stop by my latest, and of course a poem I wrote for yours trully Jaylovelss... ..I'll be back with a link .. the link is a poem I wrote for her 3 years ago. At one time her name was RAIN''' or something like that....lol .... Always LINDA

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 10/28/2013 5:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your work is an ongoing education, and thrill Linda - I'll be sure to re-read the 'blue bird' - the two of you are so strange & lovely, like sirens - I love women; shrewd vicious and sexy, not many creatures around like that - few things in this world warm my blood like when I am capable of creating via the inspiration of women and thereby stimulating them in return my Sphinx - Jay is very special -
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    Date: 10/26/2013 2:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Okay, i sropped by to grab the link,,, on my "LITTLE BLUE BIRD OF RAIN" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=216589 ...... i noticed you read it already... However, Justin, hope to see you around soon...xox~ LINDA
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    Date: 10/26/2013 2:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 10/19/2013 1:28:00 PM
    Holy smokes, Justin....this enchanting seductress holds quite a power over you. A shewolf with the password to heaven, prowling on the scent of prey. Every line superb and rich, especially the ending :)

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 10/20/2013 2:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    More like a power with me Karen - I work very diligently not to accept my inspirations as 'free' or for granted - just doing my best to consolidate my partnership with the ancient energy of the Cosmos - seductress is a beautiful term - thanks for everything Karen - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 10/14/2013 1:59:00 PM
    :)) Beautiful and captivating. I believe I shall read it over and over and over again <3

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 10/16/2013 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your sentiment is appropriate Jay, considering that this inspiration is your domain - thank you - pretty avatar - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 10/14/2013 11:31:00 AM
    A classical poem this Justin, amazing love it...

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 10/14/2013 1:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Classic in truth Harry - enchantment is enriching - thanks my friend - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 5:23:00 PM
    Exciting one, Justin. I'm glad you treasure her, whoever she may be, wherever in space she roams. She must treasure you the same. :) It's refreshing to read and leaves one bedazzled after reading. The last two lines particularly blew me away. Fantastical composition. I know of nothing less in your writing. Always, Laura

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 10/14/2013 1:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for being so beautiful and stimulating Laura - She is a real mystery, a true danger in all the right ways - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 10/9/2013 2:47:00 PM
    Wow!!!! Absolutely enthralling!!!! Magnificent!

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 10/10/2013 2:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Super glad to know I got your heart tickled Eileen - there are some amazing women in my life - J.A.B. %