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  1. Date: 11/16/2013 2:48:00 PM
    Way to go with this winning work..Enjoyed reading ..Congrats...Sara

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 11:09:00 AM
    Craig, Congratulations, on your 'Take the Leap' win............ LOVE ~ SKAT ~

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 12:29:00 PM
    Excellent ghazal, Craig, you take us to the world and back to the individual, very questioning, congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 8:51:00 PM
    this is wonderfully penned Craig...i could hear the beat of the heart throughout this read...Fine poem...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 3:10:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win, Craig

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 6:51:00 PM
    Powerful! The words and the beat coincide. : )

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 5:21:00 PM
    Well alright! I was wondering who else might have entered this contest. I think you've got a winner here... Very nice. Thank you for the comments.

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 11:41:00 AM
    Hi, Craig....Soup Mail! :)

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 6:13:00 PM
    very nicely penned Craig.....thanks for stopping by

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 8:00:00 AM
    Du dum..du dum..I can feel the heartbeat Craig..the war..its pain....the healing... and the heart again.You never cease to amaze me

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 5:07:00 PM
    Very amazing, Craig....Awesome! I don't usually like to read on war, having lived through it, but for YOU, I will make an exception! :) SOUP MAIL

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 8:49:00 AM
    A very strong & necessary reflection for the masses. Powerful flow. Excellent work.

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 12:09:00 PM
    Outstanding job!

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 10:20:00 AM
    I can tell that you love more than one kind of music.......(me too)......and you make me feel the beat to your drum, or the heart-break of that blues in the night!! Good entry!!

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 10:03:00 AM
    Yup, yup you done did it! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 4:09:00 PM
    Okies Craig help has arrived your radeef [repeating word or phrase is BEAT] you have that correctly!! :) NOW your kaafiyaa [rhyming word] is incorrect. This is to be the word before the FIRST radeef, you have that as [haunting] /good chose since most 'ing words will rhyme with it! SO you can NOT use an 'a' or a 'the' before BEAT

    Cornish Avatar Craig Cornish
    Date: 10/9/2013 5:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Alrighty then--done! I missed that part--thank you. Changed this way to save the meter (the beat)
    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 10/9/2013 4:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    BUT This is what I'd suggest 1.easiest, change the radeef/repeat word to a repeat PHRASE [the BEAT] 2.then you can use feel/peal/heal/steal/conceal just remove & change the word haunting line 1
  1. Date: 10/9/2013 1:13:00 PM
    I've got to try this...you've inspired me with your "beat" BG