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floating feelings

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floating feelings

flying high within
floating on
wings of love
beating on the walls
softly like those
fluttering wings
butterfly feelings
emotions kiss
when i laid
eyes on you

becoming one world
a dense fog lifts
an oasis
of paradise
drinking from
the cup
you became
my addiction

hooked like a fish
fighting this 
loving feeling
as the feet
landed on shore
hook line and sinker
you got me

walking the sands
of life
your hands
in mine
stepping into 
the setting sun
tonight we dine
awaiting morning
in a rising sun
eloping with you
to a golden paradise

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  1. Date: 10/10/2013 5:11:00 PM
    Well penned romantic piece my friend.

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 4:46:00 AM
    Ahh..this is so romantic ..One i must favour..I am in love with these words especially the ending lines...They really got me hooked.

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 11:37:00 AM
    Hey Liam buddy, Nice romantic write from you my friend. Ken