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  1. Date: 10/25/2013 11:17:00 PM
    Wow, nicely written Debbie. I know about foster homes . Thank you for coming to read my Angel Hearts. I never posted it before, because I didn't like the way it turned out so I never posted it ;}

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 7:02:00 PM
    Moving! Powerful sense of loss conveyed, so sad. Story well told.

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 12:41:00 AM
    Hie Debby. I enjoyed the poem. So creative and sounds like outer world. it provokes imaginations. JM

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 3:21:00 PM
    well written....this form is new to me there a minimum or maximum staza required? wishes

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 11:25:00 AM
    now we're talking real ghazal here, debbie... love the sharp mood of lost child.. this is what i meant when i did my new contest.... sounds heavy metal or country to me... love it!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 8:17:00 AM
    WOW! So THIS is what Ghazal is all about...A form that originated in our parts of the world....Very touching and deep write, sad....Thanks for bringing this to light

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 1:08:00 AM
    Debs, this is a pretty cool form. I think I may have done one before. Can I enter that one if I did it? I like the subject of this. it seems like it is going to become a Stephen King sort of story. BTW,I think you meant "know" in next to last line?

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 10/9/2013 6:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oopsie YES thank you Andie fixing no to KNOW!!