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Take Two and Call Me in the Morning

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Take Two and Call Me in the Morning

Poetic Terrorist- flagrant Errorist!
While all I write feels meritless
And all I do seems perilous!
Chalk it up to being careless...

My Heart, my Mind- about to burst!
Born, was I, a Soul accursed...
A million wounds I have nursed
Still I feel always the worse

Send helicopters full of doctors-
Tell me, what is their diagnosis?
Oh! the Tests conclude I'm awkward!
(What a bleak and poor prognosis!)

*Old experimental piece

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  1. Date: 10/15/2013 9:08:00 AM
    My poet friend This may be experimental but it passes all the tests of a great write. And if being awkward is bleak, then I have the same diagnosis. LOL Hugs

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    Date: 10/16/2013 7:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol Thanks for the laugh and review, Robin ;)
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 6:43:00 PM
    If this experimental then I would have to stand for the serious ones...lol. Good job my dear Archaic. You seem to write like everyday, I envy that lol. My inspiration don't come as freely as yours do. I've penned two simple poems today, check them out when you get the chance. Your friend always......Mustapha.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/10/2013 7:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My creativity got jump started after my near death overdose back in July. Thanks as always for the read and reply, Mustapha :)
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 2:54:00 PM
    Your experimental piece is quite brilliant.. :)

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    Date: 10/10/2013 3:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    <3 Thanks, hon :)
  1. Date: 10/9/2013 1:21:00 PM
    A bomb blast in the midst of my reticent mind! Your experimental pieces have become detrimental to a languid mind! They push one to the limit of imagination.... I love your style my man. Keep up the beat! Friend. JM

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    Date: 10/10/2013 12:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Joseph, your kind, thoughtful and supportive words mean a great deal to me; I'm happy this piece made you feel that way. Many thanks, my friend! :)