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  1. Date: 10/10/2013 9:15:00 AM
    Interesting work..Sounds very complicated..Thanks for stopping by..So there is no contest about Mohammad..Good luck in the contest for which your work was written..Sara

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 12:43:00 PM
    Yes Carrie one thing modern ghazal does in stay IN THE MOMENT and vacillation between the 'interior' moment & the 'exterior' moment. Glad you enjoyed it! L & L

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 10:29:00 AM
    "The muddied waters of anxiety eat away the bliss"......this added human element to what could be a beautiful one food for thought to read between the lines of what some would think a poem about nature. Excellent!