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Below is the poem entitled A SEASON'S DANCE which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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All seasons romp through nightfall, dawn, and rain
With leaves prancing as breezes lead their  way ,
A tango of summer glazes the spotlight
When boughs display a fired tap to excite.

Soon, autumn bares her petals in orange
To foxtrot with the moon, sleek like curved trees
Cascading on lanes robed in amber and gold
A rhythmic glide that makes chilled buds unfold. 

Though winter mellows when snow meets the dark
December spins a waltz, pacing her gait;
Unlike springtime, raw fragrance in new bloom
Wild rumba thrills high from a floral costume.

Seasons bounce along tempos, each one rare
Welcoming cycles filled with pirouettes
Their symbol of thanks to God for nature’s dance;
Oh dames of joy, bring moments of romance!

A Season's Dance Contest, Gail Doyle
by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 10/24/2013 11:53:00 AM
    Congrats on your win, Nette! The poem is well-written and your win is much deserved indeed! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 1:15:00 PM
    congrats Nette.. LOVE --SKAT

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:04:00 PM
    Nette, love it...a wonderful win in Gail's "A Season's Dance " contest.... Always ~LINDA

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 9:59:00 PM
    Excellent write, Nette! I like the way you used different dances with each of the seasons. Congrats your 1st place win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 1:04:00 PM
    Beautiful, rhythmic words penned, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 10:27:00 AM
    Love it, Nette!

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 10:50:00 AM
    Beautiful lines and imagery. Last line is my fave. congrats on your well deserved win

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:02:00 AM
    Lovely and awesome piece...Great write,Nette..Congrats on your superb win in this contest...

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 8:52:00 AM
    This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 9:42:00 PM
    Simply lovely Nette. Congratulations on your no. 1 win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 8:04:00 PM
    nette: Congrats on a beautiful poem and a great win! G.

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 7:49:00 PM
    Your seasons are dancing like sugarplums throughout this beautiful poem!! Lovely work, Nette! Congrats to you!

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 4:36:00 PM
    beautiful dance through words on pages, you paint the scene well...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 4:20:00 PM
    Well done Nette....Seren

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 2:10:00 PM
    Wow Nette! You really know how to bring the words to life! I see you've been writing some rhymes lately... I will look forward to reading them as soon as I get the time. Thank you for stopping by with your comments on my song. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :o)

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 9:59:00 PM
    Nicely done! My favorite line is, "to foxtrot with the moon." I love the way you've woven the dances together. Good luck in the contest... Jacck

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 9:33:00 PM
    Beautiful, Nette! I love every line and the last stanza brought it all together perfectly...a winner for sure. Love and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 2:24:00 PM
    it was like a dance came together really beautiful

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 7:39:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your dancing lines..It soon will be full fledge fall here..Reads like a winner in the contest to me..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 11:57:00 PM
    Love this Nette!Wonderful imagery in this poem!