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Absence

Dark Hole!

There is a hole inside me I cannot fill
There is a void, a window if you will,
It is the absence of joy and pain
It is the stillness, a black and white stain,
Created by the passage of time
Created by the holes that you find,
In your heart from a sneak attack!
By someone who should of had your back
By someone who shoot you in the back,
I try in fact to patch this hole
I try but lack the tactics to meet this goal!
So I grow cold
So I grow old,
With this hole
In my soul!

RP.




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  1. Date: 10/31/2013 12:12:00 PM
    Such depth; if only those voids could be filled quickly. Very nice RP!

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    Date: 10/31/2013 6:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you!
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 2:57:00 AM
    Ow these verses speak volumes re the hollowness of soul ..that missing part which fulfill us and make us complete.Everyone pass from such times..But the sun will shine again.Excellent post and tnks for reading my verse.

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    Date: 10/28/2013 6:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Charmain! I Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 10/15/2013 11:29:00 AM
    Very impactful piece. I hope the hole has been filled.

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    Date: 10/22/2013 6:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard, Appreciate the feedback!
  1. Date: 10/11/2013 2:03:00 AM
    A pensive poem imaginative with holes in souls. D rhymin is fabulous too. Plug them with belief bro. And do read my latest.

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    Date: 10/22/2013 6:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You, Will do!
  1. Date: 10/8/2013 3:47:00 AM
    This is written very smooth and creatively. I must say that it is a powerful write. Thanks for stopping by.

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    Date: 10/9/2013 5:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You Pace! Always an honor for You to comment on my work!
  1. Date: 10/7/2013 9:56:00 PM
    A very powerful poem no doubt by a powerful soul, enjoyed xxx

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    Date: 10/9/2013 5:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rose, Appreciate the love!
  1. Date: 10/7/2013 6:05:00 PM
    Nicely rhymed and heartfelt.

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    Date: 10/9/2013 5:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea....... : )