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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 1:17:00 PM
    one of the deepest senryu... welldone once again...PD

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 3:42:00 PM
    And your poetry is precious to me Yasmin, I am happy you decided to friend me... I will miss you for the time being... Linda

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 10:44:00 AM
    So true the best course sometimes is to 'look' elsewhere! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 8:07:00 PM
    God Senryu here Yasmin.Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 12:53:00 AM
    thanks for your kind words on choco mama. I put it in PD's contest. Maybe it can win in that one!!

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 9:04:00 PM
    marreey.. it is said that when one loses a sense, another one compsensates for it... a deep and soul-filling write.. you in mumbai?.. take care and priya huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 1:21:00 PM
    Hi Yasmin, Short but sweet.. Ken

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 11:33:00 AM
    good one Yasmin..PD

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 5:41:00 PM
    WOW, this is really good!!!!! wish I could come up with such a one.

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 4:36:00 PM
    Yasmin, this is a terrific senryu! If for the contest, a winner for happy to be back reading your wonderful poems. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 3:53:00 PM
    WOW!! This is incredible! This is such a stupendous write my friend! Again I must say wow! You have amazed me yet again with this tremendous poem Yasmin! I am in awe with your abilities! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!