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Coming Soon

Hello....Hello!
Hello,brothers and sisters
I'm from new chamber
-With new medicine for you
Who stand far from me
Please come closer......
Sleepless night,
Bad habit
Laugh at me
No problem!We have remedied
Use and fall in love with sleep.
Home is an annoyance,
Babes are botheration,
The wife is tension,
Time stops to walk,
Dreams forget to come!
Take our advice....you will find His family.
Youth escaped early
Empty crown of head,
White on the beard,
All day tension!
Just change your vision....Our top medicine!

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  1. Date: 11/12/2013 5:45:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win! Very nice work, Litan!

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 6:39:00 PM
    congrats on your win Litan

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 4:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win, Litan

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 9:25:00 PM
    Litan... Congratulations, thanks for the support..... ~SKAT~ LOVE

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 6:33:00 AM
    strong pen Litan and very true enjoyed this Ty for visiting my work Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 9:13:00 AM
    Enjoyed this....great wisdom along with the message..time doesn't stop. Things change..as we must...and be happy with what life deals us...or try.....:-) :-) :-)

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 5:23:00 PM
    I wish it were so easy to change our ways! Sometimes, the only thing we need is a good friend. Who can cheer us up, and make everything better, again. A great poem, with a great message. Well done, Litan!

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 12:01:00 PM
    - Litan, all the best to you my friend! - You o.k? - oxox // Anne-Lise :))

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 3:03:00 AM
    i was hooked tille i found the elixir at the endm litan.. yes, change your perspective and all will be well... a gem of a positive write!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 7:54:00 PM
    bloody I thought you are writing something about Christ! Your medicine a great write.great message! (:v Jenish.

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 9:07:00 AM
    amazing message here Litan,, like your poetry....

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 12:09:00 PM
    rightly so, litan...when we change our attitude, we flow with the moment.. greeat write!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 8:20:00 AM
    This is absolutely awesome poem my dear friend Litan. I love it and so enjoyed reading it this evening! thanks for sharing and the smiles!:)))))) Have a great day! love lots and hugs, Leonora

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 10/11/2013 12:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's happy to have your comments.Thanks alot
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 5:53:00 AM
    Very nice remedy here Dr. Dey...I like your sense of humor, especially the bald head and white beard reference...Funny yet very sound advice! - Tim

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 10/11/2013 12:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha ha! Thank you Tim...Have a good day
  1. Date: 10/9/2013 7:30:00 PM
    I agree with your remedy, change the vision and see what happens, healing follows, thank you for sharing this xxx

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 10/9/2013 9:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you rose
  1. Date: 10/9/2013 4:41:00 PM
    I cannot sleep at night and am tired during the day but I can't take medicine for either problem...sometimes I wish it were as easy as a magic pill....nice write....hugs :)

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 10/9/2013 9:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sleepless night is more botheration than hard work.Thanks for your sweet comment
  1. Date: 10/7/2013 5:42:00 PM
    ah, sweet sleep. how I miss it. I go to find it and I just can't find it anymore!

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 10/8/2013 12:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh...i see.This is now the problems of maximum.My medicine is for those who don't want to sleep.You are different...want but can't.Thanks for sweet visit dear
  1. Date: 10/7/2013 12:12:00 PM
    - Terrible not getting sleep at night ....... I often do not sleep .... counting hours and minutes .... then rings the alarm clock .............. lol. - Thanks for the nice poem Litan! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 10/7/2013 12:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Then take my drug....i'm sure it will work.Thanks