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the salt house

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the salt house

oh! my salt house,
i cannot assure 
that you are in the color of azzure!
just loitre around
and stole our heart 
to play with thee !
don't you feel sorry to kill us?
but i feel for the way we pollute
forgive us, and accept as friend
please not as fiend! 

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  1. Date: 10/8/2013 7:19:00 PM
    Srinivethaa, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

    RAJAKRISHNAN Avatar SRINIVETHAA RAJAKRISHNAN
    Date: 11/5/2013 10:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT.TO TELL ABOUT ME I AM JUST A STUDENT OF CLASS 9 IN SJN INTERNATIONAL SCHOOL
  1. Date: 10/8/2013 5:26:00 AM
    great nivethaa by bagya mam

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 6:35:00 AM
    hello, Srinivethaa, ,intresting and deepI like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 4:39:00 AM
    very nice personification poem

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 4:07:00 AM
    Welcome to P-Soup, Srinivethaa ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

    RAJAKRISHNAN Avatar SRINIVETHAA RAJAKRISHNAN
    Date: 10/7/2013 4:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANKS ANNE
  1. Date: 10/7/2013 4:01:00 AM
    Well written and nicely expressed. Love your style and choice of words. Welcome to poetry soup,this a family you can call your own. Wishing you the best. Baron Of Ebullion