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not love

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not love

walking into 
an orchard
someone ate 
the apple
i see rotten
inside core

silent teardrops
falling deeply
screaming inside
noiseless pain
a shadow
cursing 
the sadness

a ghost
of mourning
an empty void
crying unfilled
one vacant ache
echoes  sorrow
suffering loss

dreary eyed
walking this road
embraced in darkness
lost a second heartbeat
love you do 
not hurt inside
i was a fool
in loving

love you never
let me down
only now one sees
behind the mask
a lying face
shatters and breaks
in truth love
all an illusion

love opens 
the eyes coldly
lost in 
a million pieces
all shattered dreams
never to be found
on a different planet

in the reflection
shattered feelings
everyone 
a broken dream
it was not love
who done this 
to me
sorry love

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  1. Date: 10/7/2013 4:43:00 AM
    - Not easy .... Dreams are important .... but not everyone will be fulfilled - Well written Liam!! - Have a nice new week!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 8:07:00 PM
    Could it be the frog who ate the apple...lol.

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 5:05:00 PM
    liam, love can open eyes, and easily blind one at the same time... love this one from you... very deep, and sad... enjoyed...Linda

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 4:54:00 PM
    Hey Liam, Some wonderful words inked here my friend... Ken