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Apple Pickin' Time

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Apple Pickin' Time

If only I had some teeth
Or hands of the human kind
Then there wouldn’t be a doubt
About apple pickin’ time

A mouth would be so handy
Never mind a pair of jaws
Sure, I’m great at holding candy
Yet, would like at least two paws

Bored of being a bumpkin
Walking with a little lumpkin
But until I am reborn
I’m a trick-or-treat pumpkin

If only I had some teeth
Or hands of the human kind
Then there wouldn’t be a doubt
About apple pickin’ time

I’d roll to a market stand
And fling out the bonbons
Then bite into a Cortland
Where heaven on earth is found


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  1. Date: 11/11/2013 9:24:00 AM

    This has great rhythm, flow and rhyme..I like the mix of the pumpkin a fall item with the "Apple Pick'n"..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 9:21:00 AM

    congrats on your win David

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 5:28:00 PM

    David, , Awesome Apple Pickin' Time Win................ SKAT ~ LOVE ~

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 12:08:00 PM

    Clever and whimsical. Very nice. Congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 4:09:00 AM

    Congrats on the win , David

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 8:26:00 AM

    David, this sure was fun to read, great job, I hope it does well in the contest for you! MC

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 5:44:00 PM

    A great write! Very creative, David, thoroughly enjoyed it :)

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 6:54:00 PM

    This is a very unique take on the contest theme. I liked this poem, David, it made me smile! Great work! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you for the kind comments. I really appreciate it!

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 6:33:00 PM

    OMG, most original poem I have seen today. Awesome creativity.

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 4:31:00 PM

    Very imaginative . Love your bumpkin pumpkin. So cute....Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 5:11:00 PM

    Hello David, a ripe picking and good contest entry... Impressive! Stunning imagery and words..i was intrigued an lost in thought of REBORN, in such a moment... Dynamic work!.....luv~ Linda