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FORBIDDEN

~ZOMBIE NIGHT~ 

WHINING WHISPERS MOVE ACROSS FORBIDDEN LAND
Rugged ruins crumble silent through the night
Echoes of the dead roam the air
Moonlight vanishes to complete despair
Bones slowly desert distorted resting homes
Ascension of the dead -Longing to live again 

Sands of desert flip the hour glass back
WHIMPERING WHISPERS MOVE ACROSS FORBIDDEN LAND
Rugged ruins crumble silent through the night
Echoes of the dead roam the air
Moonlight vanishes to complete despair
Bones slowly desert distorted resting homes 

Taking light from where evil strays 
Feeding away leaving behind a death valley zone
WONDERING WHISPERS MOVE ACROSS FORBIDDEN LAND
Rugged ruins crumble silent through the night
Echoes of the dead roam the air
Moonlight vanishes to complete despair

Dead souls forsake the common land
Shadowing like Equinox light 
Walking corpse covered in rotten barren sand
WINDY WHISPERS MOVE ACROSS FORBIDDEN LAND 
Rugged ruins crumble silent through the night
Echoes of the dead roam the air

Upright, forward broken taboo 
Searching for the perfect breath of fresh air
Sounds of symbols march the ground
Searching to find their missing heartbeat
WHISKING WHISPERS MOVE ACROSS FORBIDDEN LAND
Rugged ruins crumble silent through the night


Ascension of the dead  -Long to live again 
Bones slowly desert distorted resting home
Moonlight vanishing in complete despair
Echoes of the dead roam the air
Rugged ruins crumble silent through the night
WHEN WHISPERS MOVE ACROSS FORBIDDEN LAND

by;PD

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  1. Date: 1/22/2014 8:03:00 PM

    I am started to feel sick again,they told me i could get the phoniama back again i've tryed to listen to the doc but i always end up outside or in a cold place it's not easy to stay warm where i am. about lizze loved her haunting story, the stone it was a vision of death and life a balance i guess. cheri

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 11:38:00 PM

    Adore your imagery. It said 'forbidden' and so here I am haha is this meant to be a song by any chance. I read it with a beat in my chest. Looking forward to reading more. ~ Sam

  1. Date: 12/23/2013 11:42:00 AM

    excellent one

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 5:56:00 PM

    Wow! Incredible write xo Jon

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 1:08:00 AM

    Loved this one! Thanks for your words! Great contest always. Thoubert

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 3:02:00 PM

    Hi Linda, a golden light of dark from the golden pen. Another excellent write. Now, this stirs my darker side, the darkness comes alive as the Zombies arise, broken humanity looking for strength. What was once life seeks life once more. There are those who have know mind of their own, the dangerous ones aqre those who have thought, who know they can have life again, young and strong. An excellent write. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

  1. Date: 11/23/2013 4:31:00 AM

    excellent and scary pen Linda (I love the hat) congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 9:08:00 PM

    Woa...I'm completely dumbfounded, stupified and mystified with what might be the kewlest night of the whispering, walking dead poem I've ever read. It's well...eerily inviting to my mesmerized soul. PS: Stop reading my stuff you're compliments are killing me:) Terry

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 12:40:00 PM

    I love this style. Congrats, Linda!

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 4:20:00 PM

    Nice win Linda, You know I love this poem.... Roger

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 4:38:00 AM

    congratulations Linda love xx

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 10:04:00 PM

    An outstanding poem, Linda! Of all the zombie poems in this contest, this one was the most elegantly written. If you can consider zombies as being elegant? Congratulations on your well deserved win!...Many thanks for the kind congrats on my poems! :)

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 6:20:00 PM

    Oh the poor pathetic Zombies. I wish they could just settle down and be at peace. congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 5:31:00 PM

    Way to GO, PD. A number one!! Good to see you on another winners list. Congrats.

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 5:14:00 PM

    Sis, . Congratulations with your awesome Zombie win. Stay Alive LOL....... SKAT ~Love

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 11:37:00 AM

    Oh, this is GOOD--love the repeating line--great job Texas Tiger!

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 9:44:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win, P.D.

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 9:39:00 AM

    Congrats on your superb win, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 9:24:00 AM

    Congrats Linda, this is really a beautiful poem! Love it! :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D missed you here, Yanny

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 8:59:00 AM

    PD, congratulations on your first place win in Leonora's contest today and I want to give you a warm thank you for your congratulations on my poem Blossomed Mist. Have a great day. Hugs and love, Gail

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 8:54:00 AM

    Well done Linda, this one made me think of Michael Jackson's Thriller video when Vincent price did the oration.

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 7:04:00 AM

    Hi my dearest sis & bff! Congratulations on your well-deserved super win in my contest with only one theme, Zombie! I extremely love and thoroughly enjoyed your very entertaining outstanding spooky poem with its outstandin , unique and very special form of free verse. Thank you so much for your loving support. More blessings! Biggest hugs! Lovem4evr, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 12:01:00 AM

    the dead do rise an hypnotise, the need to know is not, cos i can bloodys sympathise, before they were be-gott, they got...a lot....:}:}:} love it babe....

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 7:01:00 AM

    when I was reading this I was thinking of a sexual poem lol

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 3:22:00 PM

    Love this~that is all :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 6:15:00 AM

    Oh My!!! another great masterpiece from a great poet. (^____^) Two thumbs up!!

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 2:11:00 AM

    Such a dark loneliness ...seeking only that which we take so easily advantage ...life I could feel the darkness, the mist, the empty longing to be filled Well done. Hugs always my friend

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 9:28:00 AM

    ITS JUST WOW I HAVE NEVER BEEN INTO A FORBIDDEN LAND YOU KNOW THAT YOU ARE MY FIRST POETRY SOUP FRIEND AND WILL ALWAYS REMAIN THE BEST ONE THANKS FOR ALL YOUR SUPPORT TO ME FRIEND

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 6:01:00 PM

    That was awesome!! I'll have to read it again.

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 6:34:00 AM

    Wow what a great poem you have here. Your soup friend Michael

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