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Fluttering hearts

    The brightest star will one day die 
    Its light will shine no more
          Even the effervescent butterfly
    Will one day fall to the forest floor
    Ending the flutter of its reign
         Never to rise again

     The love we thought would never end
      Had lost its passion over time
           Now we have become just friends
     With unspoken words we mime

     Our love is like a gypsy that roams the land 
     Moving to the beat of a distant band
           Not having a sense of permanence
    But just a  fleeting presence
    Our hearts now flutter like the wings of a butterfly
          But love's  eternal beat will never die
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Contest name - Rhyme Battle
        Sponsor   - Juli Michelle
10 -5 - 2013
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  1. Date: 10/10/2013 8:33:00 PM
    Hi Joseph, , congrats with your winning poem in the rhyme battle.... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 6:09:00 PM
    Joseph, a BIG congrats on your rhyme battle win! A beautiful and poignant write! Well done!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 8:28:00 PM
    Joseph, awesome rhyme battle win.............SKAT

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 9:57:00 AM
    Great Write Joseph-- lovely analogies and metaphors.. and rhyming of course. Good luck for the contest xx

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 7:44:00 PM
    you captured me with the first line, and held it with your rhyme. Congratulations in my contest, thank you for sharing your poem with me. Love, Juli-Michelle

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 10/6/2013 10:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for my placement in your contest Juli
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 12:56:00 AM
    very nicely done, Joseph. I like the message in it.

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 6:46:00 PM
    These words are full of passion and heart. Very deep and insightful. Its moving and pulls the reader in. nice job

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 10/5/2013 8:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Robin...a pleasure to see you
  1. Date: 10/5/2013 3:29:00 PM
    This is not only a marvelous rhyming poem is is just marvelous.....

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 10/5/2013 8:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Donna...always good to see you