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Time Alleviates

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Time Alleviates

Time takes away hurt But moves slow when you’re in pain… Alarm is beeping
Russell Sivey Contest: Senryu Sponsor: Black Eyed Susan 10/5/2013

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  1. Date: 10/8/2013 7:30:00 AM

    Awesome Senryu Russell, stunning entry for Susan's contest :) all the best to you.. Could not agree more with your statement here!

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 9:51:00 PM

    Alarm is beeping, i feel.. is the strongest line here. As if to say, time is now.. wake up, get up, move on... realize that time IS passing and you have to keep up despite the hurt. That's how I'm taking it anyways. Fav'd! Love always, Juli-Michelle

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 4:07:00 PM

    Russell; I agree with you. I know all about time and pain. When I was in pain - I thought that time didn't pass. Thank God it did.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 1:56:00 PM

    Great work that you have penned..Time does seem to move slowly at times of pain and hurt..Thanks for the visit to my page..I was writing about the shooting at our nation's capitol this last week..I have not decided which way to go with it..Sara

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 11:25:00 AM

    how are you mr. jack o lantern... Hallow is just around the corner.. do you have your costume, russell?.. :) huggs

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 5:36:00 AM

    Theory of relativity poetically presented! Excellent!

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 12:38:00 AM

    A great & powerful senryu poem & pabulum as one my very dear friend Russell. I like it so much. Thank you so much for sharing again one of your very precious gems. Hope you're doing well. Have a blessed wkend to you and your family/love ones! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 8:46:00 PM

    Yes I agree with the statement Russell,hope your not in any pain thought, hugs xxx

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 6:56:00 PM

    Wow, this is very powerful Russell. You said it all it just three lines. Magnificent. Hugs and love, Gail

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 3:33:00 PM

    This one is .....timeless and priceless!!!!!! Winner!!!!!

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 2:08:00 PM

    powerful senryu with depth and emotional appeal, russell... grreat end line!..:) hugggs

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 9:19:00 AM

    I can't disagree with the thoughts, Russell