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hello

dazzling beautiful 
as i smiled
the whole way 
through  a dream
lifting the curtain
painting fairytales
you sure can
pipe enchanting 
sweet talk

you play 
in such beauty
magically cast
lifting skywards
in the song
playing one tune
sings sweetly
floating emotions

sky clouds 
touching cotton
embraced emotion
hello what inspires 
such amazing 
beautiful words 
is a dream

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  1. Date: 10/5/2013 8:04:00 PM

    You have crafted this very well, skillful at the art of beauty, one can't resist your charm Liam, smile xxx

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 2:18:00 PM

    my, this brings such wonderful sentiments about affection... well crafted, liam... :) huggs

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 11:45:00 AM

    Liam, Such a beautiful poem....I enjoyed reading it! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 10:43:00 AM

    Hello Euphoria:) wonderful poem, Liam, your poems work like magic and you sure sound euphoric about your love!