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Unending Spring

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Unending Spring

Red wine and retrospect 
Make my thoughts more clear
Life here is not our own
And time swirls out of our control

Seasons come and go too fast
Dancing on spring days never last 
Summer heat gives way to fall
And wintery evenings take their toll 

Then suddenly, comes twilight’s dread
As days draw closer to an end
Much faster than we ever dreamed
Stolen away from us, it seems 

When confusion and sadness creep inside 
And whisper fear into my head
When sorrow brings me to my knees 
Haunting me inside my dreams

When I ponder life and death  
The breathing of my dying breath
The finality… It just seems wrong.
Is this to be my final song?

Or can I long for something more…
Will I enter some unknown door
when my flame is finished burning
when my body shudders cold

Can I boldly face what is to come  
Trusting there is something better?
An eternal season to dance and sing…    
The hope of dancing in an unending Spring

 © Rebecca L ~ 2013





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  1. Date: 11/1/2013 2:31:00 PM

    Thank you for your kind comment on my poem A Viking Funeral. I read your poem and I enjoyed it, especially, "Red wine and retrospect. I can relate; I'm Italian and I always contemplate when I'm drinking. I'm 77 and I am looking forward to an unending spring Ralph Sergi

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:12:00 AM

    I absolutely love the mood you put me in when reading your work. And trust that I'm far away dancing along with you and your thoughts. :)

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 10/29/2013 9:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh wooow..you have such a beautiful voice!!!!!!!!!
  1. Date: 10/14/2013 4:33:00 PM

    A very well composed poem. Love the way you entwined nature into your feelings and images throughout your poem. Well done, now for the you Tube.

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 3:46:00 AM

    What video!!!!!!!!!! I would love to see it. This poem is outstanding Becca! I really truly enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 6:49:00 PM

    Very, very beautiful. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 12:26:00 PM

    Becca, your video is stunning and your poem is magnificent. So glad I came across this today :)

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 9:21:00 AM

    Good morning Becca.

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 7:54:00 AM

    Excellent. Well crafted poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 6:55:00 PM

    I remember reading this one Becca, and hearing it. Still as beautiful as ever. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 12:50:00 PM

    Becca this is a medley of beautiful words and very strong images of how life and time passes us by, sometimes we don't even see those times, I love the line " The breathing of my dying breath"...it is a very well constructed piece of work and I love it, well done...David

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 11:30:00 AM

    Good morning Becca, so nice to have you back. I hope that you are well on the way to full recovery.

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 11:16:00 AM

    I like the comparison of life to the seasons....well penned Becca

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 8:37:00 AM

    Becca, looking forward to more poems from you, you write so well

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 7:45:00 AM

    A beautiful Poem. I like this entire stanza "When I ponder life and death The breathing of my dying breath The finality… It just seems wrong Is this to be my final song"

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 12:55:00 PM

    Hey my friend Becca, I remember loving this poem when I first heard you recite it. Your voice was angelic and totally pulled me in. Reading this gem has just confirmed once again what a talented writer you are. If we take our time and absorb these words and reflect on them we are truly touched by them deep within our souls. Thank you my friend for touching my soul today. Big hugs. Hope you are doing ok.

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 10:43:00 AM

    Hi Becca, A most charming write from you..I liked this one as I'm glad I stopped by.. Ken

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 7:48:00 PM

    Well done, Becca....thoroughly enjoyed your work! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 6:50:00 PM

    Well crafted Becca. Never disappointed by your work.

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 11:09:00 AM

    Beautifully executed. If one is not ready to face tomorrow, how can they really be ready today? Either way, tomorrow is an inevitability.

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 9:15:00 AM

    I hope there's something better on the other side, if not i have dancing shoes for nothing. Thanks for the visit!

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 8:56:00 AM

    A very beautiful heartfelt poem this is my dear friend Becca! So love it and I extremely enjoyed reading it this evening! Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your kind visit on my work. I'm sorry if I come only now 'cuz of time constraint. Again, thank you so much for sharing your precious gem & your precious time stopping by on my work. Have a great day! love and biggest hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 11:18:00 PM

    Hi Becca, It works for me...well done my friend.. Ken

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 4:01:00 PM

    this is so beautiful and sad, and yes i will go right now to hear you recite this just knowing i will love to hear you...

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 12:34:00 PM

    it sang of the page very beautiful piece

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 3:34:00 AM

    What a soft beautiful voice you have dear Becca.This is one of your best poems and now having a chance to hear you reciting it too gives it more depth and feeling.Wish you could call on drake s show one time..Going tmfvs

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 7:23:00 PM

    Get well soon Becca, you are in my prayers. Don't worry you have a lot more dancing to look forward to.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/6/2013 7:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Also the poem is fantastic as always. Another for my favorites.
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 8:52:00 AM

    Dear sweet Rebecca! Love this line... "The hope of dancing in an unending Spring" I wish you a speedy recovery my friend. Love ya! Big hugs, Jack xoxox

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 12:54:00 AM

    I really like this one of yours, Becca. and the ending is ideal the hope of dancing in an unending spring. what dreams are made of!!

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 4:55:00 PM

    This is a wonderful and enlightening write my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this tremendous poem here this evening! What an amazing piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 4:31:00 PM

    This fleeting life is not to regret for a preparation for the eternal life is! You have become very philosophical my dear Becca thus profound without losing your poetic dexterity!

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