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Canzone di rimorso -Song of Remorse-

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Canzone di rimorso -Song of Remorse-

The symphony that was my heart             
has dimmed to a cello serenade,             
a slow and mournful melody,                  
a silhouette of love casting its long shadow over me.  

I am a singer without a voice, a poet without a muse.  
A heart without music hardly beats at all and without you, 
mine beats less and less every day. Send me a song so that I may once again sing.  
Lend me an ear so that my love song may be heard.  
O love, love that I have known, is it a sin to ask what I ask of you?
  
You have sat beneath the fall of tears, 
until nothing was left but a pillar of salt.  
Therefore count my love unworthy, 
my knees tremble with the burden of carrying my heavy heart. 
I can scarcely compete with the warbler who brings song to thee, 
and yet, because I love you,

I conceal the grace to live…

still in love… and yet,
 
in vain.  

~ Jim Jordan

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  1. Date: 10/27/2013 10:27:00 AM
    JIM< ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 1:22:00 AM
    Hello JIM, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 9:05:00 PM
    Jim, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 2:31:00 AM
    Welcome to P-Soup, Jim ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 9:30:00 PM
    Jim, i like the Spanish course. Very deep.. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@